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1/7/2018 c6 celine.sLineC-Line
Nice idea
Perhaps lire Will be better after that for the tully
No pregnant lisa
No stupid petyr...
Btw... you changed snape's Life? No death eater, no beeing the main culprit of her death after voldy...
You speak a lot lot lot and lot about lily's past Life and comparing... its à little tiring... i hope she Will grow up... and move on...
Des you next chapter
I m curious To read what you Will change with the targaryen...
1/7/2018 c6 1sarah-rose76646
Hi,
Love the story. Great chapter again.
Been following your stories since years and years ago.
One point of discontent in this chapter though.
Axel walking at 6 months, Lily walking at 5 months?
Babies are barely able to stand unattended at 9 months approximately. At 10 months, they can walk with assistance. At 11 months, they can walk a very short distance. At 12 months, they can toddle freely without assistance.
I think it would be very unrealistic for baby Axel and Lily to walk around at their age.
Regards
1/7/2018 c6 7LadyKatherineFeyQueen
Oh this was so wonderful. It had all the great moments of seriousness. Fluffy and good humor. Cat and Liily bonding a bit. Plenty of Petyr and Lilly bonding. Along with baby Axel, being super cute. Loved Lily's internal debate about freedom vs her new family. Petyr seems a little more balanced this time around. Likely with Lilly giving sage advice, he's got a bit more under his belt this time. I'm hoping he doesn't end up super jaded and unable to make real friends or relationships. Still Petyr has a part to play. Just how he plays it, will be interesting to watch. Hoster has just lost Minisa, and he's likely a wreck. The kids will need some short of adult figure to help them mourn. Hopeful Black Fish, can be there for them. I'm betting they will need him. Lysa will definitely need her uncle. Hopeful Cat will be able to be a rock for the rest too. But I get the feeling she is going to need a good long cry. Along with a ranting about how it was cruel to take Minisa from her family. And fuck the gods for doing so. Maybe all of them need that. Loved the update. You did great.
1/7/2018 c6 2Jonis
I hope Lily will be able to improve things.
1/7/2018 c6 Anonymous
Great job! Can't wait to read more.
1/6/2018 c6 Ashes Ascending
Nice chapter
1/6/2018 c6 Guest
I could be way off base, but was mentioning that Lily started walking early at 5 months and Axel started walking at 6 months foreshadowing? I feel like magic sort of speeds up development of infants and toddlers and if Axel is this way, maybe he was born with magic of his own? If so, it would be really cool if he were reincarnated from the Harry Potter world too! Even if it's just a minor character or someone Lily wouldn't have known personally. And he'd obviously try to hide his magic or knowledge too, so I could see both of them hiding it and getting suspicious of each other until they finally figure it out! But like I said, I could be extrapolating totally wrong! Good chapter!
1/6/2018 c6 30Sparky She-Demon
I'm almost *liking* Baelish. Good job on that count, since I despise the character!

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
1/6/2018 c5 Sparky She-Demon
Okay I wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to seeing what role Axel plays for Lily!
1/6/2018 c4 Sparky She-Demon
So Baelish is going to be Lily's Snape equivalent here?

Am really liking how you're writing the Blackfish!
1/6/2018 c6 22edboy4926
Awesome chapter
Sad that you killed Lily’s new mom.
Wonder how Car will react when Lily becomes queen of Westeros.
1/6/2018 c3 30Sparky She-Demon
I am not surprised that Lily will be getting along so well with Brynden! I'm looking forward to more with them!

I can't wait for Lily to be turned loose on Baelish!
1/6/2018 c2 Sparky She-Demon
This has the potential to be an interesting pairing.
1/6/2018 c1 Sparky She-Demon
Looking interesting. Will be reading onward!
1/6/2018 c6 12arturus
Excellent, well-paced chapter.
I look forward to more of this fantastic fic.
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