12/7/2018 c16 7bikerboy
Hey, so this was pretty awesome. Yeah it's a bit sad to see the story end, but who knows, maybe you'll make a sequel or some cool short/mini stories. Either way, this was an awesome story and that i hope to see more stories from you, see you in the next story.
Hey, so this was pretty awesome. Yeah it's a bit sad to see the story end, but who knows, maybe you'll make a sequel or some cool short/mini stories. Either way, this was an awesome story and that i hope to see more stories from you, see you in the next story.
12/4/2018 c16 3Troy Groomes
What's next Lilly video tapes Humphrey & Kate dancing to a slow dance classic song and sends it to her parents?
Triple alpha thumbs up my friend
What's next Lilly video tapes Humphrey & Kate dancing to a slow dance classic song and sends it to her parents?
Triple alpha thumbs up my friend
12/3/2018 c16 anonymous self thinker
believe it or not i've actually been waiting for this chapter, so yeah, be glad to see a sequel in the future
believe it or not i've actually been waiting for this chapter, so yeah, be glad to see a sequel in the future
12/3/2018 c16 2KeithTheLoneWolf
This was a beautiful and amazing story Dominic, it's just sad to see that it's coming to an end. You honestly nailed this story just like the other stories. Great Job Dom. Double thumbs up for this chapter
This was a beautiful and amazing story Dominic, it's just sad to see that it's coming to an end. You honestly nailed this story just like the other stories. Great Job Dom. Double thumbs up for this chapter
10/18/2018 c15 7bikerboy
Hey, so this was pretty cool, though this is a new view of Humphrey's father, in which now one of the questions is if he's a nice guy but gets drunk and talks nonsense or if he's actually like that drunk or not and Humphrey just tries to deny it. Also he just accepts that he wants to be homeless, even though he could've lived in just about any foster home? Okay, so Humphrey is kinda a idiot but yet he's still smart. Like, he knows that some foster homes let you go to public schools right? But yeah, i do have a question, was Humphrey's life actually like this and he just wanted to ignore it or was this just his memory being a bit messed up for being homeless and having heart attacks for so long? But anyways, this was cool, see you in chapter 16.
Hey, so this was pretty cool, though this is a new view of Humphrey's father, in which now one of the questions is if he's a nice guy but gets drunk and talks nonsense or if he's actually like that drunk or not and Humphrey just tries to deny it. Also he just accepts that he wants to be homeless, even though he could've lived in just about any foster home? Okay, so Humphrey is kinda a idiot but yet he's still smart. Like, he knows that some foster homes let you go to public schools right? But yeah, i do have a question, was Humphrey's life actually like this and he just wanted to ignore it or was this just his memory being a bit messed up for being homeless and having heart attacks for so long? But anyways, this was cool, see you in chapter 16.
10/18/2018 c15 anonymous self thinker
nice one dom. one of the best chapters so far for this one. cant wait for 16
nice one dom. one of the best chapters so far for this one. cant wait for 16
10/17/2018 c15 2KeithTheLoneWolf
Awwww, Humphrey and Kate are finally kissing and I'm very happy to see that Humphrey is alive. Dom for god sakes stop saying you're trash man. You know you're not trash, stop lying to yourself. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Awwww, Humphrey and Kate are finally kissing and I'm very happy to see that Humphrey is alive. Dom for god sakes stop saying you're trash man. You know you're not trash, stop lying to yourself. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
10/6/2018 c14 RockRole
Man it was a great story but please update it soon.
Man it was a great story but please update it soon.
9/25/2018 c14 7bikerboy
Hey, so this was pretty shocking to happen and really good. I do wonder why Humphrey just ignored an alert, especially with how he's living, there could've been something even worse and he'd never known until it was too late. But still, hopefully he'll be okay since Kate and the others found him, but still, i wish him luck. But yeah, glad your okay, see you in chapter 15.
Hey, so this was pretty shocking to happen and really good. I do wonder why Humphrey just ignored an alert, especially with how he's living, there could've been something even worse and he'd never known until it was too late. But still, hopefully he'll be okay since Kate and the others found him, but still, i wish him luck. But yeah, glad your okay, see you in chapter 15.
9/23/2018 c14 2KeithTheLoneWolf
I don't care if this chapter was short it was absolutely amazing and shocking! Keep up the amazing work Dominic! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I don't care if this chapter was short it was absolutely amazing and shocking! Keep up the amazing work Dominic! Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/2/2018 c13 The Return of the Enclave
So Humphrey has been missing person. Damn well Kate will have talk to him in deed. So have a good day tell next time.
So Humphrey has been missing person. Damn well Kate will have talk to him in deed. So have a good day tell next time.