for No 'room' for nuisances (TSODD Human Version)6/15/2018 c2 
5Rivik
I like the story, the way you put the cold personality of his, but I think If I understood right, it does start at the Asia/Raynare arc. It's a good start, hope to read more!
p.s is Law the only op chara in that story, that'll appear?because if yes, it would be cool to see how he gets another nemesis, like Doflamingo
5RivikI like the story, the way you put the cold personality of his, but I think If I understood right, it does start at the Asia/Raynare arc. It's a good start, hope to read more!
p.s is Law the only op chara in that story, that'll appear?because if yes, it would be cool to see how he gets another nemesis, like Doflamingo
11/14/2017 c2 8CRUDEN
Nice
I don't know if English is your primary language but I'd recommend to get a beta reader it could help with the grammar
Other than that I like the story keep it up
8CRUDENNice
I don't know if English is your primary language but I'd recommend to get a beta reader it could help with the grammar
Other than that I like the story keep it up
9/19/2017 c1 WOLF SIN OF GREED
interesting way starting this story, plus I also think that when luffy and law go against kaido they will find kidd and he will team up with them to beat kaido and I'm looking forward to the next chapter
interesting way starting this story, plus I also think that when luffy and law go against kaido they will find kidd and he will team up with them to beat kaido and I'm looking forward to the next chapter
9/17/2017 c1 Kickass Law
Thank you very much and I hope see the next chapter.
Thank you very much and I hope see the next chapter.