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11/4/2018 c5 Guest
Hey, I like your story but seriously? We don't talk like that! I'm talking about how you write Nessa's speech, we don't talk like that please stop. I find it a little offensive and if we sound like that to you, I understand why you wrote it that way and withdraw my complaint
11/4/2018 c6 Mariah
sorta funny but why would Astrid attack them?
9/25/2018 c1 Marie
Hiccup and Astrid

Also, it would be interesting to the mother surviving.
12/27/2017 c4 Mariah
Is this a hiccup/astrid story or hiccup/oc?

I prefer hiccup/oc stories?
9/19/2017 c3 MMM
oh you choose hiccup and Astrid okay I guess that's fine.

will Nessa find a new lover and father figure for her girls?
9/19/2017 c2 MMM
wow she lived also how about hiccup X OC?
9/19/2017 c3 Guest
Yo pienso que despues de terminar o no la historia, podrías hacer una versión de ella en la que hipo se enamora de nessa
9/18/2017 c2 Guest
Let me make this simple: I love Hiccstrid and by this time in the HTTYD timeline it is inconceivable that they could possibly be paired with anyone other than each other. That being said if don't like Astrid then don't pair her with Hiccup but at least be respectful enough of the character to "write her out" of this story. The best way, I believe, would be to kill her. Period. Then do whatever you want, but realize that you will lose at least one reader and very possibly more, but it is your choice.
9/18/2017 c1 Guest
please make sure the mother survives..please
9/17/2017 c1 chimuelo1315alli
that is hiccup and astrid, that the mother dies and the name of her that is bertha continues please
9/17/2017 c1 Guest
Should be HiccupxAstrid. I can see the story going with adopted children helping build up their parenting skills and handling situations. As for rhe mother, either way is fine.
9/17/2017 c1 MMM
how about hiccup X OC there are million of Astrid and hiccup so how about a different character.

also all those wounds seem like death unless you want her to survive?

also if you do decide hiccup x OC can you make a jealous Astrid?
9/17/2017 c1 Guest
Well I think the children's mother should die and they become fond of Hiccup and Astrid, who eventually adopt them as their own! I am a huge Hiccstrid fan and really cannot see those two without each other
9/19/2017 c3 7BattleUnit3
Oooohhh Astrid is jelly. Full support on Nessa not dying but becoming good friends with Hiccup
9/18/2017 c1 2Nia Haddok
Gods I really love it and it was only the begining
I hope the story contain Hiccstrid!
Update soon!'
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