
10/21/2022 c1 PokemonEnjoyer3494
After reading both this story and the original back to back I gotta say you really did improve a lot, both in writing quality and plot quality. Honestly this fic was really interesting. Sad to see this account is inactive now but after reading the authors notes at the end of the chapter I just wanted to say I sincerely hope your doing okay.
After reading both this story and the original back to back I gotta say you really did improve a lot, both in writing quality and plot quality. Honestly this fic was really interesting. Sad to see this account is inactive now but after reading the authors notes at the end of the chapter I just wanted to say I sincerely hope your doing okay.
2/10/2019 c30 Ol'3lueEyes
I never left the story. I just did not review the other chapters. I still read them.
I never left the story. I just did not review the other chapters. I still read them.
4/7/2018 c22 Ol'3lueEyes
I liked Family Issues the best. It shows a softer side to Ethan, that we most likely won't see for a while. It also shows how strong Ethan and Ellen's friendship is.
I liked Family Issues the best. It shows a softer side to Ethan, that we most likely won't see for a while. It also shows how strong Ethan and Ellen's friendship is.
3/11/2018 c19 Ol'3lueEyes
I know I may sound a little impatient, but when will my OC make a full appearance?
I know I may sound a little impatient, but when will my OC make a full appearance?
2/22/2018 c18 Ol'3lueEyes
Aurora borealis at this time of year at this time of day in this part of the country localized entirely within your kitchen? I'm sorry. I jut had to make that joke.
Aurora borealis at this time of year at this time of day in this part of the country localized entirely within your kitchen? I'm sorry. I jut had to make that joke.
1/7/2018 c14 Guest
RIP AND TEAR! RIP AND...
Wait... That's DOOM...
Though, I'd love to see Ash Ketchum's or a Poke-human's reaction to a huge, power-armored space Marine ripping a demon's spine out with his bare hands and using it to beat another one to death.
...wow, my imagination is FUBAR
RIP AND TEAR! RIP AND...
Wait... That's DOOM...
Though, I'd love to see Ash Ketchum's or a Poke-human's reaction to a huge, power-armored space Marine ripping a demon's spine out with his bare hands and using it to beat another one to death.
...wow, my imagination is FUBAR