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9/28/2017 c1 32The Passionate Admiral
Indeed. No offense, but it is plainly obvious that English is not your first language. I already assumed as much when I discovered that you're from Italy. Aside from that, there are a number of conspicuous errors in spelling and grammar throughout this chapter.

However... the story itself is fairly interesting. The concept of having two kings at once - one on the Iron Throne and one who travels the realm - is rather unique. That is a very original premise. Perhaps Aenys and Aegon will actually manage to establish order for the first time in a very long while.

Of course, I cannot speak too soon. For the present, the two kings seem to have thought this plan all the way through. I still wonder if Brynden Rivers will eventually go to the Wall. If not, the Three-Eyed Raven arc will not be able to happen in the future.

Lastly, young Walder Frey... how odd that HE bring up the issue of heirs. I suppose he WOULD be an expert on that subject.

It looks good so for. I'll read more.
9/19/2017 c2 timijaf
Interesting story
9/18/2017 c1 22mpowers045
Nicely done

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