for A Shinobi's Take on this Wonderful World15h c109 SlyFox9
You never cease to amaze me Spirit. Excellent work as always.
It was a smart decision to cram Naruto and Kazuma’s time at the castle into one chapter otherwise it’ll get boring too quickly.
Obviously Naruto continues to boost his reputation as a capable man and Hero candidate. While Kazuma continues to make a nuisance out of himself and made himself look like an ass. I would say that I felt sorry for him and wished that Claire and Rain would give him the benefit of the doubt and that they could’ve witness Kazuma’s heroic deeds. But I can’t say that he didn’t deserve the treatment especially when he started this petty war against Naruto and tried to defame him by spreading exaggerated false rumors about him. Which is bold of Kazuma especially when he has a long list of exaggerated rumors about him that are mostly true. Anyway season 3 really showed off Kazuma’s scumminess, he would’ve been viewed in a better light if he didn’t act on his self desires and ego.
It was funny that Kazuma tried to appeal Claire by saying that she and Naruto would make a good couple. I find it cute that a stern woman like her would get all embarrassed about that. I’m curious will she try to seduce Naruto?
But you know what really stand out in this chapter is when Naruto was pranking Kazuma when he transformed into Aqua. That was perfectly executed. I hope that the next time Naruto meets up with Vanir he’ll transform in Aqua and annoy the hell out of him.
I so can’t wait when both Naruto and Kazuma’s parties finally meet ul with them at the castle. That’s when this arc really starts to pick up.
Thanks again Spirit.
You never cease to amaze me Spirit. Excellent work as always.
It was a smart decision to cram Naruto and Kazuma’s time at the castle into one chapter otherwise it’ll get boring too quickly.
Obviously Naruto continues to boost his reputation as a capable man and Hero candidate. While Kazuma continues to make a nuisance out of himself and made himself look like an ass. I would say that I felt sorry for him and wished that Claire and Rain would give him the benefit of the doubt and that they could’ve witness Kazuma’s heroic deeds. But I can’t say that he didn’t deserve the treatment especially when he started this petty war against Naruto and tried to defame him by spreading exaggerated false rumors about him. Which is bold of Kazuma especially when he has a long list of exaggerated rumors about him that are mostly true. Anyway season 3 really showed off Kazuma’s scumminess, he would’ve been viewed in a better light if he didn’t act on his self desires and ego.
It was funny that Kazuma tried to appeal Claire by saying that she and Naruto would make a good couple. I find it cute that a stern woman like her would get all embarrassed about that. I’m curious will she try to seduce Naruto?
But you know what really stand out in this chapter is when Naruto was pranking Kazuma when he transformed into Aqua. That was perfectly executed. I hope that the next time Naruto meets up with Vanir he’ll transform in Aqua and annoy the hell out of him.
I so can’t wait when both Naruto and Kazuma’s parties finally meet ul with them at the castle. That’s when this arc really starts to pick up.
Thanks again Spirit.
10/2 c109 Guest
The guy underneath the guest asking if he could turn your story into a comic is an absolute legend because I would absolutely read the comic if it becomes a thing
The guy underneath the guest asking if he could turn your story into a comic is an absolute legend because I would absolutely read the comic if it becomes a thing
10/2 c109 Guest
Fun chapter, hope the meditation section means there wonte be any more of Sylvia going forward.
Fun chapter, hope the meditation section means there wonte be any more of Sylvia going forward.
10/2 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
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Having read your absorbing Story, A Shinobi's Take on this Wonderful World, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
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10/2 c109 scl04
Another great chapter full of fun shenanigans during this week with Naruto and Kazuma having this little competition for Iris’ attention!
First is the 4th day for them in the castle and Iris is now asking for ramen herself with Claire and Rain eating it for the first time themselves and get hooked, well the princess should be fine due to her younger metabolism and Rain is mindful after Kazuma spoke about how fattening the “Food of the Gods” is but Claire with three bowls…I guess that all of the training with Naruto could help her but I don’t know LOL, so tough luck for Crapuma who tries to smear Naruto’s name at that moment with the so called “rumors” but the shinobi flips it by challenging him to a sparring match with Claire enjoying herself at his misery and Iris going along with it as revenge for him cheating in their games…poor Kazuma ;P. As a side note I did wonder about the opinion of Iris and those two bodyguards of her regarding Jiraiya and yeah it’s as I expected LOL, the former with fondness since he treats her well and the other two view him with contempt for his lewdness with Claire being the most vocal, Naruto also has a pervy side however and she herself deep down as seen later so pot meet kettle much LOL.
Anyway Kazuma would get some revenge towards Naruto in return the day after after he and Iris catch him meditating as he’s dealing with Sylvia most likely, one would think that Kurama as well but the fox had other things in mind obviously as we see with him deciding to aid the Crapuma as well as the princess XD, and yeah writing in his face “Hopeless Ramentic” as well as all of the doodles is crazy but hey at least Naruto took it well…and regardless he wasn’t going to let that slide by a long shot and Kazuma paid it dearly afterwards. Before that however in the sixth day that those two have been in the castle Naruto has a game to show Iris that he can find easily a needle in a haystack which impresses her as well as Claire with Kazuma noting while jealous of seeing Iris having a good time with the ninja that Claire looks totally smitten by Naruto with another one falling for “The Player”, and of course he proceeds to tease her for it as retaliation for her cold treatment towards him in comparison to Naruto’s with even pointing out how a kid between her and the shinobi would look like Iris which is a critical blow for the knight and making her nosebleed to boot…how naughty what could’ve she had imagined? ;P
It’s then when Naruto decides to go for the throat with Kazuma and man he really went all out here, like not even with him pranking Aqua (showing how even then she has a “preferable” treatment from his part perhaps? ;D) or others he went as hard to the point of maybe making someone question their sanity. First transforming into Iris and making him think that she’s telling him to leave and calling him names which is bad enough but also doing the same for Claire and Rain with the former asking him out, Kazuma might be smart and usually would question it but when he has boobs in front of him that changes :P, and the former for help in teaching the princess strategy which of course is all wrong and makes him look like a fool as Naruto hogged all of Iris’ attention. And then with a week having passed not only Naruto interrupts Kazuma from his morning harassment towards the maid, good that he actually calls Heidel by his name by the way and a better morning routine than the hikiNEET fr sure, but then he transforms into Aqua and making it seems like she has gotten to the palace which would be bad enough for Kazuma but also makes it seems like she’s trying to sneak and steal booze which would leave a bad impression of Kazuma if discovered…just to end up being seen by Iris, Claire and Rain as a mess once again, still though it seems that after that Naruto offers peace to Kazuma and he takes the offer as they go to play with the princess together if losing again (and Naruto doesn’t really like losing either even if he weren’t as explicit as Kazuma LOL).
So overall a fantastic chapter with plenty of funny moments, as well as Kazuma understanding why you don’t get into Naruto’s nerves too much since as much as he can dish it out he’s not at the level of the pranking demon XP. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter with Darkness and the other ladies now going there for real to drag their asses back, it'll be fun to read too I bet. Thanks for all of your hard work as always!
Another great chapter full of fun shenanigans during this week with Naruto and Kazuma having this little competition for Iris’ attention!
First is the 4th day for them in the castle and Iris is now asking for ramen herself with Claire and Rain eating it for the first time themselves and get hooked, well the princess should be fine due to her younger metabolism and Rain is mindful after Kazuma spoke about how fattening the “Food of the Gods” is but Claire with three bowls…I guess that all of the training with Naruto could help her but I don’t know LOL, so tough luck for Crapuma who tries to smear Naruto’s name at that moment with the so called “rumors” but the shinobi flips it by challenging him to a sparring match with Claire enjoying herself at his misery and Iris going along with it as revenge for him cheating in their games…poor Kazuma ;P. As a side note I did wonder about the opinion of Iris and those two bodyguards of her regarding Jiraiya and yeah it’s as I expected LOL, the former with fondness since he treats her well and the other two view him with contempt for his lewdness with Claire being the most vocal, Naruto also has a pervy side however and she herself deep down as seen later so pot meet kettle much LOL.
Anyway Kazuma would get some revenge towards Naruto in return the day after after he and Iris catch him meditating as he’s dealing with Sylvia most likely, one would think that Kurama as well but the fox had other things in mind obviously as we see with him deciding to aid the Crapuma as well as the princess XD, and yeah writing in his face “Hopeless Ramentic” as well as all of the doodles is crazy but hey at least Naruto took it well…and regardless he wasn’t going to let that slide by a long shot and Kazuma paid it dearly afterwards. Before that however in the sixth day that those two have been in the castle Naruto has a game to show Iris that he can find easily a needle in a haystack which impresses her as well as Claire with Kazuma noting while jealous of seeing Iris having a good time with the ninja that Claire looks totally smitten by Naruto with another one falling for “The Player”, and of course he proceeds to tease her for it as retaliation for her cold treatment towards him in comparison to Naruto’s with even pointing out how a kid between her and the shinobi would look like Iris which is a critical blow for the knight and making her nosebleed to boot…how naughty what could’ve she had imagined? ;P
It’s then when Naruto decides to go for the throat with Kazuma and man he really went all out here, like not even with him pranking Aqua (showing how even then she has a “preferable” treatment from his part perhaps? ;D) or others he went as hard to the point of maybe making someone question their sanity. First transforming into Iris and making him think that she’s telling him to leave and calling him names which is bad enough but also doing the same for Claire and Rain with the former asking him out, Kazuma might be smart and usually would question it but when he has boobs in front of him that changes :P, and the former for help in teaching the princess strategy which of course is all wrong and makes him look like a fool as Naruto hogged all of Iris’ attention. And then with a week having passed not only Naruto interrupts Kazuma from his morning harassment towards the maid, good that he actually calls Heidel by his name by the way and a better morning routine than the hikiNEET fr sure, but then he transforms into Aqua and making it seems like she has gotten to the palace which would be bad enough for Kazuma but also makes it seems like she’s trying to sneak and steal booze which would leave a bad impression of Kazuma if discovered…just to end up being seen by Iris, Claire and Rain as a mess once again, still though it seems that after that Naruto offers peace to Kazuma and he takes the offer as they go to play with the princess together if losing again (and Naruto doesn’t really like losing either even if he weren’t as explicit as Kazuma LOL).
So overall a fantastic chapter with plenty of funny moments, as well as Kazuma understanding why you don’t get into Naruto’s nerves too much since as much as he can dish it out he’s not at the level of the pranking demon XP. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter with Darkness and the other ladies now going there for real to drag their asses back, it'll be fun to read too I bet. Thanks for all of your hard work as always!
10/2 c109 Spellbat
The pranks Naruto did on Kazuma were amazing. I love them. Also Naruto got the personality for Aqua down amazingly.
The pranks Naruto did on Kazuma were amazing. I love them. Also Naruto got the personality for Aqua down amazingly.
10/2 c109 Samuel Santillan
I loved it, good chapter.
hahahahaha...
Kazuma, despite being so clever, can be very stupid and that's why Naruto can fool him so easily.
Claire certainly has a lot of interest in Naruto, we'll have to see if she decides to do something after the little conversation she had with Kazuma.
I loved it, good chapter.
hahahahaha...
Kazuma, despite being so clever, can be very stupid and that's why Naruto can fool him so easily.
Claire certainly has a lot of interest in Naruto, we'll have to see if she decides to do something after the little conversation she had with Kazuma.
10/2 c109 Paradoxity
Wow Claire is smitten lol, glad this "war" was settled but...why didn't Kazuma deny the laundry thing?...
Wow Claire is smitten lol, glad this "war" was settled but...why didn't Kazuma deny the laundry thing?...
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5SilverXSilver
I won't say he wasn't asking for it, but I still feel a little bad for Kazuma with some of these lol.
5SilverXSilverI won't say he wasn't asking for it, but I still feel a little bad for Kazuma with some of these lol.