
5/28/2022 c1 Pridefallen
Dude The GDI are the true masters of ion and rail tech even more so then the Tau
Dude The GDI are the true masters of ion and rail tech even more so then the Tau
3/3/2020 c1 Cullen Walsh
Good activity like where you're going with this looks quite good. The positive out of the I have some criticisms to get off my chest. Well I do like the detail you have for the ships for the top half all of them appear to just be do all be all. don't misunderstand it's quite possible to get to that point but for the time you've given them from the 150 years with no knowledge of how many worlds they have colonized of ships of this class and power makes no sense in universe it is a you yes but you've got a grounded with some things for the universe such as this. If they had 100 or maybe 200 more years then yes this very well can be the ships and capabilities they have but with the time allotted it's too OP. Other point on the world they colonized not all of them are going to be instant perfect worlds where they can get what they need. Just got to be integrate I like where this is going but one side it looks to Mary Sue. hope you have a lovely year keep up the good work and don't stop writing
Good activity like where you're going with this looks quite good. The positive out of the I have some criticisms to get off my chest. Well I do like the detail you have for the ships for the top half all of them appear to just be do all be all. don't misunderstand it's quite possible to get to that point but for the time you've given them from the 150 years with no knowledge of how many worlds they have colonized of ships of this class and power makes no sense in universe it is a you yes but you've got a grounded with some things for the universe such as this. If they had 100 or maybe 200 more years then yes this very well can be the ships and capabilities they have but with the time allotted it's too OP. Other point on the world they colonized not all of them are going to be instant perfect worlds where they can get what they need. Just got to be integrate I like where this is going but one side it looks to Mary Sue. hope you have a lovely year keep up the good work and don't stop writing
5/25/2018 c1 Unknown
I got an idea if you want, base a ship from the Olympus Mons from Infinite Warfare.
I got an idea if you want, base a ship from the Olympus Mons from Infinite Warfare.
5/21/2018 c2 Artyom-Dreizehn
lol, I'm confused when I saw there is no new chapters and skim through the previous ones and saw this. Man, never thought to see those vehicles from TI here.
lol, I'm confused when I saw there is no new chapters and skim through the previous ones and saw this. Man, never thought to see those vehicles from TI here.
9/25/2017 c1 GDIMartok
I like what your doing here and honestly I made an attempt at writing what GDI and the CnC verse future would look like. Though this guys story does it very well in my opinion if you don't know of it you should check it out.
threads/tiberium-the-fires-of-terra-msg-seed-c-c-crossover.254813/
If the link dont show just Google: spacebattles Tiberium: The Fires of Terra MSG:SEED/C&C crossover
He has that story on here but he has so many more chapters there. I will definitely be keeping an eye on this. :)
I like what your doing here and honestly I made an attempt at writing what GDI and the CnC verse future would look like. Though this guys story does it very well in my opinion if you don't know of it you should check it out.
threads/tiberium-the-fires-of-terra-msg-seed-c-c-crossover.254813/
If the link dont show just Google: spacebattles Tiberium: The Fires of Terra MSG:SEED/C&C crossover
He has that story on here but he has so many more chapters there. I will definitely be keeping an eye on this. :)