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4/29/2018 c1 69cmr2014
But what if I thought it was shit and I liked it because I like shit?

It feels kinda weird, mostly because it just goes right into it. I think I would have liked it better if all that growing together were actually shown.
As it is - I dunno, I just didn't feel the context. Given the last few lines - I just think the context doesn't play into it enough, they could easily have been just young agents who clicked from the start as they are Simmons and Ward, contagion survivors.
It's an ok one-shot, it just could make a really good longer slow-burn fic for the sake of context and payoff.

"...and rolling on the condom."
Looks like all that practice on bananas really paid off.
9/24/2017 c1 323bhut
Well, this was interesting. Thanks for sharing the story!

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