for Falling9/25/2017 c1 
4silver light of dawn
Good story, and good characterization. I especially liked Natsu's zoning out moment. The switch in tone in the shorter second part was jarring, but in a good way. It reminded me of some Chinese anti-imperial poetry from a few hundred years ago that I read.
4silver light of dawnGood story, and good characterization. I especially liked Natsu's zoning out moment. The switch in tone in the shorter second part was jarring, but in a good way. It reminded me of some Chinese anti-imperial poetry from a few hundred years ago that I read.
9/25/2017 c1 5wordsaremyspells1331
Well that got sad... I wasn't expecting that, but I LOVE it. Well done.
5wordsaremyspells1331Well that got sad... I wasn't expecting that, but I LOVE it. Well done.
9/25/2017 c1 1Fairy.Rains
Ok, first really great story. it is so perfect how I can see this really happen. and the feels for lucy at the end... but more importantly, so creepy. so im playing with a new story idea where one of the pivotal moments is when he doesn't catch her-like I'm literally writing that part of the outline right now. anywho really love it.
1Fairy.RainsOk, first really great story. it is so perfect how I can see this really happen. and the feels for lucy at the end... but more importantly, so creepy. so im playing with a new story idea where one of the pivotal moments is when he doesn't catch her-like I'm literally writing that part of the outline right now. anywho really love it.