for Escape From the Bottom of the Hill8/7/2020 c9 trscrny
Thank you so much for returning to this story. I am still with you! Please post more soon. And thank you for sharing your talent!
Teresa
Thank you so much for returning to this story. I am still with you! Please post more soon. And thank you for sharing your talent!
Teresa
6/21/2020 c8 Vadercat
I think yo need some more practice with stalled stories. You write well but you have this terrible tendency to abandon your stories before they are finished. Beginnings and middles are fine but do not tell me, the reader, what you are thinking of how you plan to end this fantasy you've taken me on. Have a heart go through your stories and finish them! Bring back faith to the writer you are.
I think yo need some more practice with stalled stories. You write well but you have this terrible tendency to abandon your stories before they are finished. Beginnings and middles are fine but do not tell me, the reader, what you are thinking of how you plan to end this fantasy you've taken me on. Have a heart go through your stories and finish them! Bring back faith to the writer you are.
2/20/2020 c8 Maria
Exciting stuff... please please finish it... Thanks...
Exciting stuff... please please finish it... Thanks...
7/5/2019 c8 Lestat74
It is not nice to leave us in suspense! Why you didn’t finish what you started?
It is not nice to leave us in suspense! Why you didn’t finish what you started?
3/2/2019 c8 Vadercat
You left me hanging, what happened with Hernandez? And what about Callen? Even though you took up another person's story doesnt mean you cant finish it with your own take. it could be an AU. I dont believe the other writer plans to fish her story.
You left me hanging, what happened with Hernandez? And what about Callen? Even though you took up another person's story doesnt mean you cant finish it with your own take. it could be an AU. I dont believe the other writer plans to fish her story.
2/19/2019 c8 Maria
Very good story.,. please finish it...
Very good story.,. please finish it...
10/3/2018 c8 
45LostForeverInHisEyes
Great job getting back into it. I definitely know how hard it can be after a hiatus. Well done.
Progress finally with Callen getting a bit better and the team finding something.
Still loving the way you are writing Michelle in this and how she handles Sam. It's nice to see that side of things since we didn't have a lot of it in the show.
Good luck keeping the flow going with this story.
45LostForeverInHisEyesGreat job getting back into it. I definitely know how hard it can be after a hiatus. Well done.
Progress finally with Callen getting a bit better and the team finding something.
Still loving the way you are writing Michelle in this and how she handles Sam. It's nice to see that side of things since we didn't have a lot of it in the show.
Good luck keeping the flow going with this story.
9/26/2018 c8 Guest
So happy ro see a new chapter. Please continue. Thank you.
So happy ro see a new chapter. Please continue. Thank you.
9/26/2018 c1 Guest
Heyyyy man i like the way you write pleasse update the story asap
Heyyyy man i like the way you write pleasse update the story asap
9/26/2018 c8 28knirbenrots
Hurray for this new chapter, glad you updated! Now, like Nell, Eric, Granger, Deeks and Kensi, oh, well, and Hetty of course, I am so curious if they can find any connection at all with former cases. Still, the fact he's a runner means he has something to hide, right?
28knirbenrotsHurray for this new chapter, glad you updated! Now, like Nell, Eric, Granger, Deeks and Kensi, oh, well, and Hetty of course, I am so curious if they can find any connection at all with former cases. Still, the fact he's a runner means he has something to hide, right?
9/26/2018 c8 sherrib1968
Really glad you are continuing this, love the interaction between Michelle and Sam, and everyone's concern for Callen of course. Here's hoping he wakes up soon!
Really glad you are continuing this, love the interaction between Michelle and Sam, and everyone's concern for Callen of course. Here's hoping he wakes up soon!
9/26/2018 c8 8orangetails
It's very hard to get a stalled story going again - well done :-) Funnily I was only thinking of this one the other day - the unfinished original story is one of my favourites and it's really sad the original author didn't complete it :-(
I hope Callen wakes up soon!
8orangetailsIt's very hard to get a stalled story going again - well done :-) Funnily I was only thinking of this one the other day - the unfinished original story is one of my favourites and it's really sad the original author didn't complete it :-(
I hope Callen wakes up soon!
6/18/2018 c7 Guest
Please continue this story!
Please continue this story!