
9/28/2017 c3 Petunia3116
I loved the first story! And I love this one too! You are doing a great job with it! Now to make Callen well again!
I loved the first story! And I love this one too! You are doing a great job with it! Now to make Callen well again!
9/27/2017 c2
6ssl71
Love Sam's concern for Callen and also to strangle him for scaring him! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love Sam's concern for Callen and also to strangle him for scaring him! Looking forward to the next chapter.
9/27/2017 c2
2JaniceS
I can give a sigh of relief now that Callen and Sam are on their way to the hospital. At least there's medical staff which can tend to any problems which may arise before getting to the hospital. It's always nice to have Granger written into stories, his dour character always did have a touch of caring for the agents. Nicely done.

I can give a sigh of relief now that Callen and Sam are on their way to the hospital. At least there's medical staff which can tend to any problems which may arise before getting to the hospital. It's always nice to have Granger written into stories, his dour character always did have a touch of caring for the agents. Nicely done.
9/27/2017 c1 JaniceS
I remember reading this wonderful story and how disappointed I was when it was left unfinished. Thank you for picking up the torch and adding your own special touch to move it forward and make it your own. You can feel the tension in the beginning as well as a bit of relief as the paramedics arrive. What an excellent beginning.
I remember reading this wonderful story and how disappointed I was when it was left unfinished. Thank you for picking up the torch and adding your own special touch to move it forward and make it your own. You can feel the tension in the beginning as well as a bit of relief as the paramedics arrive. What an excellent beginning.
9/26/2017 c1
128Mulderette
Excellent :) Love what you did with this, you did a great job. Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Excellent :) Love what you did with this, you did a great job. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
9/26/2017 c1
6ssl71
Excellent story. Hetty will always worry for her boy. Looking forward to future chapters.

Excellent story. Hetty will always worry for her boy. Looking forward to future chapters.
9/26/2017 c1
1Amjm
Thank you ever so much for continuing this story! It felt bad to read it without it being concluded ... and your ending will give me peace of mind!

Thank you ever so much for continuing this story! It felt bad to read it without it being concluded ... and your ending will give me peace of mind!