for Yu-Gi-Oh! VRAINS: Hidden Memories4/16/2024 c78 Jason
This was a great chapter
This was a great chapter
4/16/2024 c78 
6kaisershadowhunter
I must say Lilith Deck is Awesome!, but my question when is Yasutake gonna return? specially with current war I expect him to return sooner or later.
6kaisershadowhunterI must say Lilith Deck is Awesome!, but my question when is Yasutake gonna return? specially with current war I expect him to return sooner or later.
4/16/2024 c78 TheRealD3lph0xL0v3r
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
GO TEAM GOLDIE!
STOP THE DIVINE-ATTRIBUTE IGNIS FROM ACHIEVING WHATEVER WARPED PLAN HE HAS IN MIND!
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
GO TEAM GOLDIE!
STOP THE DIVINE-ATTRIBUTE IGNIS FROM ACHIEVING WHATEVER WARPED PLAN HE HAS IN MIND!
4/16/2024 c78 2Ethan Kironus
I'm sorry to hear about your burnout. Takes as much time off as you need, you hear me? We can wait.
Can I maybe borrow Curse of Dragon Thunder, with full credit to you of course? Planning to give my Ritual Yu-Boy OC BLS/Gaia, and it would be a very helpful way to make his Xyz options more flexible while also giving more targets for the Lv 5 Dragon support than just the Fusion stuff.
More a question than a criticism, and not relevant to the outcome of the duel, but I don't think Maritime Moasaur's effect should have been relevant to Spell Substitution-even if Substitution couldn't be responded to-because it was a trap card copying the activated effect of a spell card, rather than activating the spell card itself. Similar to how Transaction Rollback bypasses the cost for whatever it copies, in that it goes straight to the effect.
I was a bit worried you were going to throw Masako under the roomba as well, but this is better. Though I do feel like a tie would have them both disappear, or at least bring some penalty for Roboppi, and I'm not just saying this because I'm still disgruntled about Ghost Girl being used as his EXP fodder. Her new archetype is decent and you do a good job making the custom cards stand on their own, but it also makes the duels blend together that much more. I guess Dainsleif is named after the mythical sword and not the Genshin Impact character who likely also got his name from it.
This section near the end is very abrupt and needs a better transition, I don't know if a linebreak got deleted by accident but it really seems like the same scene.
- 'Goldie's eyes glowed for a second. Then she nodded. "I found them." She glanced at Diana. "Get ready."
Cassiel, Playmaker, Revolver, and Soulburner shot into the central area, and three of them blinked. "Huh?" Soulburner said. "No one's here."'
2Ethan KironusI'm sorry to hear about your burnout. Takes as much time off as you need, you hear me? We can wait.
Can I maybe borrow Curse of Dragon Thunder, with full credit to you of course? Planning to give my Ritual Yu-Boy OC BLS/Gaia, and it would be a very helpful way to make his Xyz options more flexible while also giving more targets for the Lv 5 Dragon support than just the Fusion stuff.
More a question than a criticism, and not relevant to the outcome of the duel, but I don't think Maritime Moasaur's effect should have been relevant to Spell Substitution-even if Substitution couldn't be responded to-because it was a trap card copying the activated effect of a spell card, rather than activating the spell card itself. Similar to how Transaction Rollback bypasses the cost for whatever it copies, in that it goes straight to the effect.
I was a bit worried you were going to throw Masako under the roomba as well, but this is better. Though I do feel like a tie would have them both disappear, or at least bring some penalty for Roboppi, and I'm not just saying this because I'm still disgruntled about Ghost Girl being used as his EXP fodder. Her new archetype is decent and you do a good job making the custom cards stand on their own, but it also makes the duels blend together that much more. I guess Dainsleif is named after the mythical sword and not the Genshin Impact character who likely also got his name from it.
This section near the end is very abrupt and needs a better transition, I don't know if a linebreak got deleted by accident but it really seems like the same scene.
- 'Goldie's eyes glowed for a second. Then she nodded. "I found them." She glanced at Diana. "Get ready."
Cassiel, Playmaker, Revolver, and Soulburner shot into the central area, and three of them blinked. "Huh?" Soulburner said. "No one's here."'
4/16/2024 c78 1pokemonking0924
Lots of great duels as usual but Lilith's new Deck was certainly a surprise and I like it
Can’t wait to see what else is inside her new deck
Looking forward to seeing what chaos Jormungand will add to the next few episodes
Keep up the good work
1pokemonking0924Lots of great duels as usual but Lilith's new Deck was certainly a surprise and I like it
Can’t wait to see what else is inside her new deck
Looking forward to seeing what chaos Jormungand will add to the next few episodes
Keep up the good work
4/16/2024 c78 8LoneTaker
Lilith's Astrogard deck sort of reminds me of Dragunity. Also, I like the etymology of the Link Monsters being named after legendary swords. Looking forwards towards Astrogard Excalibur or Astrogard Murakumo!
Also, yeah. Writer's fatigue is a bitch. Been through it myself during college years, and I think writing out your ideas can help offset the fatigue, at least for me.
I can wait as long as you need for your next chapter. You're one of the few good Yu-Gi-Oh! fic writers that are left, so please, take care of yourself.
8LoneTakerLilith's Astrogard deck sort of reminds me of Dragunity. Also, I like the etymology of the Link Monsters being named after legendary swords. Looking forwards towards Astrogard Excalibur or Astrogard Murakumo!
Also, yeah. Writer's fatigue is a bitch. Been through it myself during college years, and I think writing out your ideas can help offset the fatigue, at least for me.
I can wait as long as you need for your next chapter. You're one of the few good Yu-Gi-Oh! fic writers that are left, so please, take care of yourself.
4/9/2024 c77 12SakushiRyu
All right, I've finally gotten around to reading this chapter! Sorry for the long wait... I got seriously distracted, to say the least. Now then, on to the review! While nothing too surprising happened and all the duels ended as everyone probably expected them to, it was still an enjoyable ride in my opinion.
It was nice to see a change in the line-up, namely replacing Revolver's opponent with Goldie, and the said Ignis's lockdown strategy. Your take on the duels between Ai's team and Hanoi was also great, I really liked the OC cards you gave to the latter. Spectre's "chickens" instead of "frogs" moment was golden, too. A bummer to see them lose, and so quickly at that, but alas, it was unavoidable. The intro to the next chapter's duel was very funny, though I can't help but be worried for Lilith... It was also nice to see a little bit of Ouroboros, and the revelation that Zahhak nearly got a heart attack from a duel cracked me up. Man, I love Zahhak's character. And this speaks volumes of Arianrhod's strength and builds her up without her doing anything on screen, well done!
QOTC: I think I've already told you my opinions on them when you first showed me them in PMs, but in any case, I think they fit their respective Ignis perfectly, both design and effect-wise. Especially their effects, it's nice to see something of Cyspirits and Cyangels in them and that their summoning requirements require each of the three Attributes of their respective Ignis. Can't wait to see Cypher's reaction to Silver Desperado.
12SakushiRyuAll right, I've finally gotten around to reading this chapter! Sorry for the long wait... I got seriously distracted, to say the least. Now then, on to the review! While nothing too surprising happened and all the duels ended as everyone probably expected them to, it was still an enjoyable ride in my opinion.
It was nice to see a change in the line-up, namely replacing Revolver's opponent with Goldie, and the said Ignis's lockdown strategy. Your take on the duels between Ai's team and Hanoi was also great, I really liked the OC cards you gave to the latter. Spectre's "chickens" instead of "frogs" moment was golden, too. A bummer to see them lose, and so quickly at that, but alas, it was unavoidable. The intro to the next chapter's duel was very funny, though I can't help but be worried for Lilith... It was also nice to see a little bit of Ouroboros, and the revelation that Zahhak nearly got a heart attack from a duel cracked me up. Man, I love Zahhak's character. And this speaks volumes of Arianrhod's strength and builds her up without her doing anything on screen, well done!
QOTC: I think I've already told you my opinions on them when you first showed me them in PMs, but in any case, I think they fit their respective Ignis perfectly, both design and effect-wise. Especially their effects, it's nice to see something of Cyspirits and Cyangels in them and that their summoning requirements require each of the three Attributes of their respective Ignis. Can't wait to see Cypher's reaction to Silver Desperado.
2/3/2024 c77 7TheBlazingButterfly777
Thinking about the next chapter…
I wonder if Lilith deck is gun theme.
Feel like something really interesting gonna happen
I predict ti will release this month. Maybe next week
7TheBlazingButterfly777Thinking about the next chapter…
I wonder if Lilith deck is gun theme.
Feel like something really interesting gonna happen
I predict ti will release this month. Maybe next week
11/20/2023 c77 Anonymous
Missed opportunity for Ai and Goldie to use pendulums to represent Goldie and Cypher.
Missed opportunity for Ai and Goldie to use pendulums to represent Goldie and Cypher.
11/20/2023 c77 Dante687
Great chapter.
For the AtIgnister monsters they could be link 4 monsters because they are ignis of life and death.
Great chapter.
For the AtIgnister monsters they could be link 4 monsters because they are ignis of life and death.
11/18/2023 c70 Guest
There's a mistranslation in the anime about the part that Ai said Lightning is the world's first AI with instinct. The Japanese said "Aitsu ni iwasereba, sekai de hajimete honnou motta AI dakara na." The right translation should be "As he (Bohman) said, because I'm (Ai referring to himself) the first AI with instinct." This is more make sense because it has been mentioned and explained before that Ai is the very first AI with instinct, and the other Ignis developed their own personalities only after they observed Ai. And right after Ai said this, Revolver also pointed out how Ai neglected his own work, which further emphasized that the first AI with instinct is Ai. Saying that Lightning is the first AI with instinct would contradictory to Bohman's previous statement about Ai.
There's a mistranslation in the anime about the part that Ai said Lightning is the world's first AI with instinct. The Japanese said "Aitsu ni iwasereba, sekai de hajimete honnou motta AI dakara na." The right translation should be "As he (Bohman) said, because I'm (Ai referring to himself) the first AI with instinct." This is more make sense because it has been mentioned and explained before that Ai is the very first AI with instinct, and the other Ignis developed their own personalities only after they observed Ai. And right after Ai said this, Revolver also pointed out how Ai neglected his own work, which further emphasized that the first AI with instinct is Ai. Saying that Lightning is the first AI with instinct would contradictory to Bohman's previous statement about Ai.
11/16/2023 c59 Leon Wilson
Did you read "The Power of Four" created by GamingGuy84?
Did you read "The Power of Four" created by GamingGuy84?
11/16/2023 c51 Guest
Great duel bro
Great duel bro
11/16/2023 c13 Guest
Great chapter dude
Great chapter dude