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10/21/2017 c1 Brown5o
this is awesome keep it up
10/11/2017 c3 Ch10m4
off came my face gruesome
10/4/2017 c2 KnightOfGlory26
Also what will happen to Shikamaru now that his dad is dead, will he want revenge?
10/4/2017 c1 KnightOfGlory26
It's cool, I enjoy and please update soon!
10/3/2017 c2 1Some Guy In An Ambulance
Hm, the shadow realm. In a ninja world. I'm half expecting there to be some Shadow Khan from Jackie Chan Adventures. Those would be some cool minions/abilities to have. In regards to his ashen state, I imagine a wind technique could be pretty annoying, either blow him away, or use an actual vacuum technique XD

If there's anything I'd like to see, it'd maybe be more interaction with other characters. So far, out of everyone he's met, there isn't really a single friendly face. They all want him for his power.
9/27/2017 c1 deathcornfive
its cool i just dont like how he can kill so easily his reflection said his chakra was like buiju chakra but it doesn't kill people that fast but great first chapter just please balance him a little godlike characters get boring fast also please describe his appearance.
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