
7/8 c30 Vadercat
Im glad you havent fully abandoned this story but that you will continue to write more and finish this story.
Im glad you havent fully abandoned this story but that you will continue to write more and finish this story.
4/9 c30 CH
what will happen next? don't wait too long to update, please
what will happen next? don't wait too long to update, please
11/19/2022 c29 Knirbenrots
Oh my they still intend to put all the blame on Duvalle, or on Rob/Callen...
Love the way you portrait all the characters!
Oh my they still intend to put all the blame on Duvalle, or on Rob/Callen...
Love the way you portrait all the characters!
10/26/2022 c28 trscrny
This is a really good story. I don't normally read unfinished stories but once I started reading I couldn't stoop even when I finally realized it was incomplete. Cou;d you please post more soon. Not a fan of Deeks on the show but I don't mind your rendition of him! LOL! No one beats Callen in my opinion though! More soon, please? Thank you for sharing.
This is a really good story. I don't normally read unfinished stories but once I started reading I couldn't stoop even when I finally realized it was incomplete. Cou;d you please post more soon. Not a fan of Deeks on the show but I don't mind your rendition of him! LOL! No one beats Callen in my opinion though! More soon, please? Thank you for sharing.
10/23/2022 c28 Richtsje
Oh wow! So glad you updated this story. And how! So well written. As if we'd be peeking in from the boatshed ourselves. Thank you for that.
Oh wow! So glad you updated this story. And how! So well written. As if we'd be peeking in from the boatshed ourselves. Thank you for that.
10/23/2020 c27 Guest
Very well-written chapter. I actually "felt" Callen's exhaustion. Looking forward to reading more.
Very well-written chapter. I actually "felt" Callen's exhaustion. Looking forward to reading more.
10/23/2020 c27 Guest
Great chapter.
I love this story, it reads so close to the show, I feel like I’m watching it happen
Great chapter.
I love this story, it reads so close to the show, I feel like I’m watching it happen
10/24/2020 c27
1reidfan1971
This story is very well written. I love how you have kept us wanting more, from one chapter to the next. It's hard to write about difficult subjects, but you are doing it so very well & continuing to keep the characters true to themselves. I'm glad to see their assignment coming to a close "peacefully"; but I also know these assignments very rarely end when the "criminals" are caught. They can have lasting effects on those involved & I'm excited to see how our hero's deal with the aftermath of such a difficult situation they've been in. So happy to see Nate involved too !
Keep you the great work !

This story is very well written. I love how you have kept us wanting more, from one chapter to the next. It's hard to write about difficult subjects, but you are doing it so very well & continuing to keep the characters true to themselves. I'm glad to see their assignment coming to a close "peacefully"; but I also know these assignments very rarely end when the "criminals" are caught. They can have lasting effects on those involved & I'm excited to see how our hero's deal with the aftermath of such a difficult situation they've been in. So happy to see Nate involved too !
Keep you the great work !
10/24/2020 c27
28knirbenrots
Woow, great update. Indeed, I expected this story would come to an end, yet 'the case isn't quite over yet!' Which leaves me in here happy and excited to wait for a next chapter!

Woow, great update. Indeed, I expected this story would come to an end, yet 'the case isn't quite over yet!' Which leaves me in here happy and excited to wait for a next chapter!