for Thunder Storm12/31/2019 c19 
2jalajalen
If your hankering to rewrite it, the last chapter isnt too much of a cliffhanger that I think people would feel upset (you didnt stop in the middle of a scene or anything). I'd say that if your unsatisfied with it you should rewrite it and then finish off the last few chapters once your happy with the rest of the story. (Although I really like the story as is, too, so I think you can probably go either way and people would be happy. My advice is to just go with whatever option appeals more to you personally.)
2jalajalenIf your hankering to rewrite it, the last chapter isnt too much of a cliffhanger that I think people would feel upset (you didnt stop in the middle of a scene or anything). I'd say that if your unsatisfied with it you should rewrite it and then finish off the last few chapters once your happy with the rest of the story. (Although I really like the story as is, too, so I think you can probably go either way and people would be happy. My advice is to just go with whatever option appeals more to you personally.)
7/10/2019 c18 Guest
This is a great Story! I LOVE it! You did a great job!
This is a great Story! I LOVE it! You did a great job!
2/13/2019 c17 3LuigiLover3174
Amazing chapter! Luigi believes in past life’s hmmmmmmmm! I’m such a Mario The Music Box Arc Fan Girl. Luciano anyone? I’m curious if you know what the heck I’m talking about. Anyway, I’m so hyped to see how you write the final boss! Keep up the great work! Ps I love your AMVs, I’m Dimentio Girl From YouTube btwOk I’ll stop rambling, bye Senpai
3LuigiLover3174Amazing chapter! Luigi believes in past life’s hmmmmmmmm! I’m such a Mario The Music Box Arc Fan Girl. Luciano anyone? I’m curious if you know what the heck I’m talking about. Anyway, I’m so hyped to see how you write the final boss! Keep up the great work! Ps I love your AMVs, I’m Dimentio Girl From YouTube btwOk I’ll stop rambling, bye Senpai
2/10/2019 c17 2Pikminfan
I'm curious to what stories you'll work on next. Take your time and no need to rush.
2PikminfanI'm curious to what stories you'll work on next. Take your time and no need to rush.
1/28/2019 c16 5ViolaHarmony
Poor Dimentio... Despite everything he has done, I can’t help but feel a little sad for him...
Ha! I was one of those weird kids who loved “The Odyssey”! :D I could never get through the Iliad, though... I also love the story of Hades and Persephone.
Great chapter! :)
5ViolaHarmonyPoor Dimentio... Despite everything he has done, I can’t help but feel a little sad for him...
Ha! I was one of those weird kids who loved “The Odyssey”! :D I could never get through the Iliad, though... I also love the story of Hades and Persephone.
Great chapter! :)
1/27/2019 c15 ViolaHarmony
Very well written, as always. I liked how you described Mr. L/Luigi’s journey through the Underwhere, especially the part with the skeletal hands in the River Twygz. Very dark and creepy! Mythology is very interesting to me, so I enjoyed the Greek mythology vibe.
Also, nice flashback scene with Blumiere.
Poor Mimi, blaming herself... :’(
Oh, Luigi. Bless your heart. :) He May have died and gone to the underworld, but as long as his brother’s there, he can still be cheerful.
Very well written, as always. I liked how you described Mr. L/Luigi’s journey through the Underwhere, especially the part with the skeletal hands in the River Twygz. Very dark and creepy! Mythology is very interesting to me, so I enjoyed the Greek mythology vibe.
Also, nice flashback scene with Blumiere.
Poor Mimi, blaming herself... :’(
Oh, Luigi. Bless your heart. :) He May have died and gone to the underworld, but as long as his brother’s there, he can still be cheerful.
1/26/2019 c14 5ViolaHarmony
NOOO! Not the cinnamon roll! :’( We all knew it was coming, but it was still sad...
Great writing! :)
5ViolaHarmonyNOOO! Not the cinnamon roll! :’( We all knew it was coming, but it was still sad...
Great writing! :)
1/26/2019 c12 ViolaHarmony
That was a crazy roller coaster of a chapter! Poor L... You did an excellent job portraying his anguish and confusion. I feel like he shifted into a sort of in-between persona that was both Mr. L and Luigi, but at the same time neither of them. If that even makes sense... Anyway, I really liked it! And now, he’s been reset... I wondered if something like this would happen. Poor Nastasia. Though she would never go against the Count, I could tell it really upset her to make Luigi go through that again.
Sorry I haven’t reviewed in so long! :’( I’ve gotten waaay behind. But I’m trying to catch up!
That was a crazy roller coaster of a chapter! Poor L... You did an excellent job portraying his anguish and confusion. I feel like he shifted into a sort of in-between persona that was both Mr. L and Luigi, but at the same time neither of them. If that even makes sense... Anyway, I really liked it! And now, he’s been reset... I wondered if something like this would happen. Poor Nastasia. Though she would never go against the Count, I could tell it really upset her to make Luigi go through that again.
Sorry I haven’t reviewed in so long! :’( I’ve gotten waaay behind. But I’m trying to catch up!
1/26/2019 c16 James Birdsong
Well written good story
Well written good story