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18Anonymous Girl Gamer
So sorry for the late review! Great chapter and I can't wait for more!
18Anonymous Girl GamerSo sorry for the late review! Great chapter and I can't wait for more!
11/28/2018 c9 5ViolaHarmony
Interesting... I like to imagine that the bros. father (or maybe grandfather) left Italy to escape Mussolini's regime.
It was nice to see a softer side to Count Bleck. I guess he's still just Blumiere deep down...
I really liked the scene with Mario, Peach and Bowser. Especially Bowser's little pep talk at the end. ;)
Great Chapter! I love how you write the interactions between characters. You're such a talented author!
5ViolaHarmonyInteresting... I like to imagine that the bros. father (or maybe grandfather) left Italy to escape Mussolini's regime.
It was nice to see a softer side to Count Bleck. I guess he's still just Blumiere deep down...
I really liked the scene with Mario, Peach and Bowser. Especially Bowser's little pep talk at the end. ;)
Great Chapter! I love how you write the interactions between characters. You're such a talented author!
11/23/2018 c9 Radio Fanfiction
Spicy! I'm just gonna leave Frankie Valli's 'I love you baby' here and skedaddle. Toodles!
Spicy! I'm just gonna leave Frankie Valli's 'I love you baby' here and skedaddle. Toodles!
11/21/2018 c9 16NormanWhitesmith
I'm excited to see what's next! You nailed the joke at the beginning and I thought you handled the serious topic at the end well. I also like the L talking in an american accent headcannon.
I can't wait to see more!
16NormanWhitesmithI'm excited to see what's next! You nailed the joke at the beginning and I thought you handled the serious topic at the end well. I also like the L talking in an american accent headcannon.
I can't wait to see more!
11/12/2018 c8 16NormanWhitesmith
You've still got it. I felt like I was in the story the entire time! I wonder how dynamics will change between the minions because of L and Dimentio's relationship in future chapters.
I can't wait to see another chapter! You're an amazing writer!
16NormanWhitesmithYou've still got it. I felt like I was in the story the entire time! I wonder how dynamics will change between the minions because of L and Dimentio's relationship in future chapters.
I can't wait to see another chapter! You're an amazing writer!
5/7/2018 c7 38SpaceDimentio
SpongeBob reference? Guess it went over my head :P
Aww, does someone miss his boyfriend?
Oh, so Dimension D is like a Holodeck, is it? That's neat. Is the game of tag going to be exclusively in Dimension D then?
Jeez, I don't think L would let him do that except that he badly wants to remember things, like who let's some smiley boi into their head just like that
Oh baby! Some fluff! I am die for fluff
Oh, uh oh, that's certainly not what you wanna wake up to; I wonder if Dimentio would also like Luigi too
Oh my Grambi, that's so cute! I might be dead now
38SpaceDimentioSpongeBob reference? Guess it went over my head :P
Aww, does someone miss his boyfriend?
Oh, so Dimension D is like a Holodeck, is it? That's neat. Is the game of tag going to be exclusively in Dimension D then?
Jeez, I don't think L would let him do that except that he badly wants to remember things, like who let's some smiley boi into their head just like that
Oh baby! Some fluff! I am die for fluff
Oh, uh oh, that's certainly not what you wanna wake up to; I wonder if Dimentio would also like Luigi too
Oh my Grambi, that's so cute! I might be dead now
5/5/2018 c6 SpaceDimentio
Sorry for the extremely late review
Man, it would be nice if coming out of the closet was that easy and unremarkable for everyone
Cont Bleck: Blowng up the world is ok but GRAMBI HELP YOU IF YOU SAY HECK
Lol Mimi might just be jealous, she was hoping to date L hmm? Nice of her to be completely supportive
Ooh, so that's how it's gonna happen eh? Interesting.
Sometimes I wonder if they got the Wario Waft from O'Chunks. He certainly did it first.
And yay for T rating! Now you have the freedom to do a lot more things with your story.
Sorry for the extremely late review
Man, it would be nice if coming out of the closet was that easy and unremarkable for everyone
Cont Bleck: Blowng up the world is ok but GRAMBI HELP YOU IF YOU SAY HECK
Lol Mimi might just be jealous, she was hoping to date L hmm? Nice of her to be completely supportive
Ooh, so that's how it's gonna happen eh? Interesting.
Sometimes I wonder if they got the Wario Waft from O'Chunks. He certainly did it first.
And yay for T rating! Now you have the freedom to do a lot more things with your story.
5/2/2018 c7 18Anonymous Girl Gamer
Great chapter! It was very well written and I look forward to more.
18Anonymous Girl GamerGreat chapter! It was very well written and I look forward to more.
5/1/2018 c7 5ViolaHarmony
Good chapter! It was very well-written. The only error I noticed was that you said the bros were born “in wedlock” when I think you meant “out of wedlock”. “In wedlock” means a couple was married. If a baby is born “out of wedlock” it means the parents weren’t married.
Oh no! O’Chunks! I have a bad feeling about this... I enjoyed the interaction between Mr. L and Dimentio. I think you wrote them very well. And Mr. L is completely adorable. :) That’s one thing he has in common with Luigi. They’re both adorkable! :D And Luigi made a small appearance! Dimentio better be careful!
5ViolaHarmonyGood chapter! It was very well-written. The only error I noticed was that you said the bros were born “in wedlock” when I think you meant “out of wedlock”. “In wedlock” means a couple was married. If a baby is born “out of wedlock” it means the parents weren’t married.
Oh no! O’Chunks! I have a bad feeling about this... I enjoyed the interaction between Mr. L and Dimentio. I think you wrote them very well. And Mr. L is completely adorable. :) That’s one thing he has in common with Luigi. They’re both adorkable! :D And Luigi made a small appearance! Dimentio better be careful!
4/29/2018 c7 16NormanWhitesmith
You know, for where Mario and Luigi grew up, I'm just going to imagine it like the neighborhood from Hey Arnold...
This was a really good chapter and I see how you got the father's name from Nintendrawer.
I like how you did the memory reveal thing and it was cool.
Good thing Dimension D didn't make Mr. L 17 again, because boy would that be awkward (Mr. L with voice cracking on every word: Are you sure you aren't messing with me?).
Unfortunately I didn't see the SpongeBob reference and now I feel bad.
Overall, I like this and can't wait to see what will happen next.
I can see dimentio as a prank forcing Mr. L into that scrapped memory you told me about with SBG because Mr. L was asking too many questions about his mom. The reactions would be hilarious.
Then again, I should stop creating stories that I'm not even writing!
Overall, you're doing great, especially if you read this entire pointless ramble. Can't wait for the next chapter!
16NormanWhitesmithYou know, for where Mario and Luigi grew up, I'm just going to imagine it like the neighborhood from Hey Arnold...
This was a really good chapter and I see how you got the father's name from Nintendrawer.
I like how you did the memory reveal thing and it was cool.
Good thing Dimension D didn't make Mr. L 17 again, because boy would that be awkward (Mr. L with voice cracking on every word: Are you sure you aren't messing with me?).
Unfortunately I didn't see the SpongeBob reference and now I feel bad.
Overall, I like this and can't wait to see what will happen next.
I can see dimentio as a prank forcing Mr. L into that scrapped memory you told me about with SBG because Mr. L was asking too many questions about his mom. The reactions would be hilarious.
Then again, I should stop creating stories that I'm not even writing!
Overall, you're doing great, especially if you read this entire pointless ramble. Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/22/2018 c6 5ViolaHarmony
I liked how you snuck in some Luaisy there. ;)
Mimi and Mr. L are really cute as friends! It was hilarious when she mimicked Dimentio and Mr. L!
It was fun to see things from Mario’s perspective for a little while. Of course he would worry about Luigi! He’s a good bro. Not a perfect one, but a very good one. ;) I liked that you addressed the three heroes’ thoughts on Mr. L’s identity. In the game, I think they’re completely oblivious. Which is hilarious, and perhaps necessary for certain plot points, but it doesn’t really make sense in a story like this one. It makes sense that they would notice the similarities to Luigi and ponder the reasons and possibilities behind them.
I think Dimentio does care a little for Mr. L. Not enough to go back on his sinister plans for him, but still. I think it adds depth to his character, too, knowing that he may have conflicted feelings on what he’s going to do.
5ViolaHarmonyI liked how you snuck in some Luaisy there. ;)
Mimi and Mr. L are really cute as friends! It was hilarious when she mimicked Dimentio and Mr. L!
It was fun to see things from Mario’s perspective for a little while. Of course he would worry about Luigi! He’s a good bro. Not a perfect one, but a very good one. ;) I liked that you addressed the three heroes’ thoughts on Mr. L’s identity. In the game, I think they’re completely oblivious. Which is hilarious, and perhaps necessary for certain plot points, but it doesn’t really make sense in a story like this one. It makes sense that they would notice the similarities to Luigi and ponder the reasons and possibilities behind them.
I think Dimentio does care a little for Mr. L. Not enough to go back on his sinister plans for him, but still. I think it adds depth to his character, too, knowing that he may have conflicted feelings on what he’s going to do.