for Finding Light in a Shadow
31/3/2018 c1 Guest
Use different words besides “then” besides that it was an ok first try
Use different words besides “then” besides that it was an ok first try
10/5/2017 c1 Starandorion
Good start but that wasn't how she broke her horn and got that scar (it slashed at her and broke her horn and scared her eye in the process). But still good job
Good start but that wasn't how she broke her horn and got that scar (it slashed at her and broke her horn and scared her eye in the process). But still good job