for Aifread's Pirate Archer10/13/2020 c4 Starlord Master
Life is just full of surprises.
Who is your favorite character in this story?
Life is just full of surprises.
Who is your favorite character in this story?
11/9/2018 c4 Guest
I think you should had Abel lost his memory in this chapter and then later on his start to remember then his find out who murder his mom he left the aifread pirate aifread follow him which led to aifread to get capture by Melchior than find the person who murder his mom they fight his lost the person freeze him for over a 1 year i think you should start the tales of berseria story after velvet and the other find out who innominat is where velvet and the other are trying to find and free abel.
I think you should had Abel lost his memory in this chapter and then later on his start to remember then his find out who murder his mom he left the aifread pirate aifread follow him which led to aifread to get capture by Melchior than find the person who murder his mom they fight his lost the person freeze him for over a 1 year i think you should start the tales of berseria story after velvet and the other find out who innominat is where velvet and the other are trying to find and free abel.
8/23/2018 c4 AlorNass
damm. so good. gonna wait for another chapter. and really? a harem? i... I mean, I know people like it, yeah, but it's so... used. every book I read with oc or reader as character is about character x character or character x harem. where mostly is this second option. then you gonna say, why you read it? well maybe because someone don't put harem in information. but back to topic. it's overused. there are a lot of it. every time where main oc character gonna be badass, there is, like you guess, a harem. like Zed like character in Rwby. or spartan from halo. odst, marine, task force, specnaz and I can told you more. so think about it. but still nice story. putting it in slow storylike you did) make it so nice to read. I was now hoping to focus on Abel. not velvet like in game. adventures with Alfried's crew, becoming pirate. and make it slowly. it will be very nice and refreshing. consider it. now have fun and good night.
or good day
depending on which time you read it.
damm. so good. gonna wait for another chapter. and really? a harem? i... I mean, I know people like it, yeah, but it's so... used. every book I read with oc or reader as character is about character x character or character x harem. where mostly is this second option. then you gonna say, why you read it? well maybe because someone don't put harem in information. but back to topic. it's overused. there are a lot of it. every time where main oc character gonna be badass, there is, like you guess, a harem. like Zed like character in Rwby. or spartan from halo. odst, marine, task force, specnaz and I can told you more. so think about it. but still nice story. putting it in slow storylike you did) make it so nice to read. I was now hoping to focus on Abel. not velvet like in game. adventures with Alfried's crew, becoming pirate. and make it slowly. it will be very nice and refreshing. consider it. now have fun and good night.
or good day
depending on which time you read it.
7/2/2018 c4 AnimeA55Kicker
Abel is going to choke on his own tongue when he sees the stripper outfit that Velvet wears.
Abel is going to choke on his own tongue when he sees the stripper outfit that Velvet wears.
6/6/2018 c4 Guest
it seems you already done with your things. WELCOME BACK ANYWAY !
it seems you already done with your things. WELCOME BACK ANYWAY !
5/27/2018 c5 Pocomo
Well after all you don't really need tell everyone about what happened to you since it's not good to seek out your private life. Hope you things got cleared as fast as possible ...
Well after all you don't really need tell everyone about what happened to you since it's not good to seek out your private life. Hope you things got cleared as fast as possible ...
4/24/2018 c5 Guest
ehhhhh... why ? even though this story may have a lot potential you know..
ehhhhh... why ? even though this story may have a lot potential you know..
4/16/2018 c4 Guest
It's already 3 months and still no update. Are you possibly dead ?
It's already 3 months and still no update. Are you possibly dead ?
3/17/2018 c4 
3PrimedBlade141
So Abel has high resonance. And since he is going to get along with Aifread and and his crew really well, especially Eizen how about letting them armatize at the later part of the story? Abel getting a bow that can harness the power of earth could be awesome. Anyway, keep it up.
3PrimedBlade141So Abel has high resonance. And since he is going to get along with Aifread and and his crew really well, especially Eizen how about letting them armatize at the later part of the story? Abel getting a bow that can harness the power of earth could be awesome. Anyway, keep it up.