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11/7/2017 c4 4Snowbeardolphin
I like how you wrote this.
10/24/2017 c3 Snowbeardolphin
I like how you wrote this.

So, in this chapter Will is attacked different and that the plan was a girl's idea and she is having her brother help.

Also, Ben is with someone else.

I like how you wrote it.
10/16/2017 c2 Snowbeardolphin
I like how you wrote this chapter.

I liked that flashback of Chad and Ben.

So, Chad sees Ben kissing Abigail at the carnival and isn't happy to see his ex boyfriend with her. So, are you going to have Chad be in a relationship with Abigail for the purpose for making Ben jealous enough that he will want to get back together with Chad?
10/14/2017 c1 47ShimmerStar5
Thank you.
10/6/2017 c1 4Snowbeardolphin
I like how you started the story.

I like that you did something new like that Ben and Chad had been involved but because of Chad cheating on him they broke up and he leaves Salem.

Now he comes back later to meet Abigail who he has been talking for with for a while. So Chad is going to be torn between his former love and Abigail and I will look forward to seeing how you will write it.

I like the backstory you created for Ben and I hope you include other flashbacks like it could be when either Chad is thinking of Ben or Ben is thinking of Chad.

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