for The Stardust of Remnant6/5/2018 c1 
1JohanNishigami
it's not meant to be for you specifically it's meant to put a brake on the otherwise serious plot showing that they are still relatable to the audience and/Or to just be slightly funny and put a different tone on the story
1JohanNishigamiit's not meant to be for you specifically it's meant to put a brake on the otherwise serious plot showing that they are still relatable to the audience and/Or to just be slightly funny and put a different tone on the story
3/20/2018 c3 Evilbadger
I really hate it when authors add needless stupid humor to an otherwise well written serious story. Case and point, the dress up scene with Jaune and his sister. stuff like that shatters my suspension of disbelief and leaves a bitter taste in my mouth while reading a story that prior to that scene I was greatly enjoying. I will continue to read this story, but given the next occurrence like this one, I will most likely abandon this fic.
I really hate it when authors add needless stupid humor to an otherwise well written serious story. Case and point, the dress up scene with Jaune and his sister. stuff like that shatters my suspension of disbelief and leaves a bitter taste in my mouth while reading a story that prior to that scene I was greatly enjoying. I will continue to read this story, but given the next occurrence like this one, I will most likely abandon this fic.
12/20/2017 c4 Guest
I love the idea of 's great idea with you getting qrow to become jaune teacher and later on introduced to yang and ruby and maybe he saves them from that grimm that attack them when they were kids and change the views of both ruby and yang. Does jaune now
how to perform jar-Kai basically dual wielding from Star Wars force unleashed 2 and combat movies if given time to learn them and his fury mode would make for a good selambec like yang with her anger and red eyes but instead his eye go to grey sliver colour like Ruby's eyes.
Is jaune/Galen harem route with team rwby and pyrrah it would be a challenge for you to do push your limits
I love the idea of 's great idea with you getting qrow to become jaune teacher and later on introduced to yang and ruby and maybe he saves them from that grimm that attack them when they were kids and change the views of both ruby and yang. Does jaune now
how to perform jar-Kai basically dual wielding from Star Wars force unleashed 2 and combat movies if given time to learn them and his fury mode would make for a good selambec like yang with her anger and red eyes but instead his eye go to grey sliver colour like Ruby's eyes.
Is jaune/Galen harem route with team rwby and pyrrah it would be a challenge for you to do push your limits
12/10/2017 c4 AnimeA55Kicker
Ok, I call bullshit on Galen ever letting anyone force him into cross dressing. Anyone else feel physically pain after reading that?
Ok, I call bullshit on Galen ever letting anyone force him into cross dressing. Anyone else feel physically pain after reading that?
11/23/2017 c4 Guest
This is an Awesome fanfiction. Seriously the puppydog eyes and play dress up on Jaune/Galen was Super no EXTREMELY PRIZEELESS. I want more updates for this fanfiction and I'm excited Jaune's/Galen's sparring match with Qrow if there will be. What would the students and teachers see Jaune/Galen in his initiation in Beacon. Looking forward for more updates and I love Galen Marek from Star Wars The Force Unleashed and making Jaune developed in a badass fighter unlike in the animated show RWBY. Lastly will you make Jaune/Galen use dual swords like in the Second Game or the stick only the first, either way is fine. Until next time i4md347h.
This is an Awesome fanfiction. Seriously the puppydog eyes and play dress up on Jaune/Galen was Super no EXTREMELY PRIZEELESS. I want more updates for this fanfiction and I'm excited Jaune's/Galen's sparring match with Qrow if there will be. What would the students and teachers see Jaune/Galen in his initiation in Beacon. Looking forward for more updates and I love Galen Marek from Star Wars The Force Unleashed and making Jaune developed in a badass fighter unlike in the animated show RWBY. Lastly will you make Jaune/Galen use dual swords like in the Second Game or the stick only the first, either way is fine. Until next time i4md347h.
11/13/2017 c2 Guest
Can we talk about how much his family is garbage ?
Can we talk about how much his family is garbage ?