for The Stardust of Remnant11/27/2022 c7 Pop
Uff top fic 12/10
Uff top fic 12/10
11/26/2022 c7 PSYCONIG
I liked the approach you took considering Amber. Using an ability open to the dark side and not magically giving him force healing. For one force healing wouldn't have made much sense considering the injury and secondly he hadn't trained a single day as a jedi. I like how your plot with the original connects. It feels natural and not forced. It also dosen't follow the plot letter for letter. I hate when somebody writes a story mades completely different circumstances but makes every major plotline the same. It feels like they do that to have sense of direction to continue the story, piggybacking from the orignal too much for my liking. You don't do that which i greatly enjoy. Thanks for your hard work.
I liked the approach you took considering Amber. Using an ability open to the dark side and not magically giving him force healing. For one force healing wouldn't have made much sense considering the injury and secondly he hadn't trained a single day as a jedi. I like how your plot with the original connects. It feels natural and not forced. It also dosen't follow the plot letter for letter. I hate when somebody writes a story mades completely different circumstances but makes every major plotline the same. It feels like they do that to have sense of direction to continue the story, piggybacking from the orignal too much for my liking. You don't do that which i greatly enjoy. Thanks for your hard work.
11/26/2022 c7 charlesparmenter5
I'm more interested in the academy and when he actually attends to beacon what his relationships will be with his teammates
I'm more interested in the academy and when he actually attends to beacon what his relationships will be with his teammates
11/26/2022 c7 
6MEleeSmasher
Okay finally someone used the Darth Vader method of using the force to make the other person regret pissing off a sith, though this is far more indirect. At least Amber is only injured and not half dead.
6MEleeSmasherOkay finally someone used the Darth Vader method of using the force to make the other person regret pissing off a sith, though this is far more indirect. At least Amber is only injured and not half dead.
11/20/2022 c6 Guest
You just don’t miss
You just don’t miss
11/17/2022 c6 Guest
Loving it so far can’t wait for the next part
Loving it so far can’t wait for the next part
10/21/2022 c6 Guest
Nice
Nice
10/18/2022 c3 Terracotta Tortilla
Ewww. The author is giving people nosebleeds when Jaune smiles? He's a child...
That's disgusting.
Ewww. The author is giving people nosebleeds when Jaune smiles? He's a child...
That's disgusting.