for The Stardust of Remnant
57/24/2022 c5 Ramos
It's just my opinion, but I think it would have been better if Marek left the past behind, he's Jaune d'arc now, he should enjoy the childhood and family he didn't have, but the story gives the impression that despite him have a new family and a new life, he doesn't seem to leave the past behind,
to me he seems to see his family as strangers, even rereading the story doesn't seem like he has a bond with them.
And I don't consider the memories mere flashbacks, but memories of an individual who stole the body of a child, sorry if I'm offending, it's not my intention, that's my opinions of what I understood from the story.
It's just my opinion, but I think it would have been better if Marek left the past behind, he's Jaune d'arc now, he should enjoy the childhood and family he didn't have, but the story gives the impression that despite him have a new family and a new life, he doesn't seem to leave the past behind,
to me he seems to see his family as strangers, even rereading the story doesn't seem like he has a bond with them.
And I don't consider the memories mere flashbacks, but memories of an individual who stole the body of a child, sorry if I'm offending, it's not my intention, that's my opinions of what I understood from the story.
7/23/2022 c1 antfig
NewMystery356 why the hate. You think Blake came to Beacon squeaky clean. She probably did the same thing as Jaune since she never went to a school being a terrorist. Remember, that terrorist group has killed people that worked for the schnee.
NewMystery356 why the hate. You think Blake came to Beacon squeaky clean. She probably did the same thing as Jaune since she never went to a school being a terrorist. Remember, that terrorist group has killed people that worked for the schnee.
7/23/2022 c5 Guest
Holy shit your back I thought this wouldn’t be updated ha good luck on your future works
Holy shit your back I thought this wouldn’t be updated ha good luck on your future works
7/4/2022 c6 Guest
Please continue this and ignore what all the haters say this is that good shit
Please continue this and ignore what all the haters say this is that good shit
3/1/2022 c6 jamal.hatch1999
I'm loving this story and when will there be an update for this and I want to know what happen and will they find out who he really is and is that him talking or the Jedi talking and who will find his secret first.
I'm loving this story and when will there be an update for this and I want to know what happen and will they find out who he really is and is that him talking or the Jedi talking and who will find his secret first.