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10/27/2021 c2 Guest
Your grammar is barely tolerable. Please work on it because I happen to like the plot of this story
10/6/2021 c6 Zero
PLEASE.
Continue.
10/6/2021 c5 Zero
Nice
10/6/2021 c4 Zero
XD
10/5/2021 c3 Zero
Poor Jaune.
No wonder he ran from home.
10/5/2021 c2 Zero
Ohohohohoho...
I wonder if he will get the Sith alchemy or Battle meditation.
10/5/2021 c1 Zero
Interesting...
10/3/2021 c4 ManWithTheMilk
I'm not one to be ragging on other people's stories, but wtf! You have a former Sith breaking down crying as Jaune's sisters force him to crossdress! That in and of itself does not make sense to me. I'm calling bullshit.
8/10/2021 c6 25NewMystery356
Okay, finally caught up. Salem is LIKE a Sith, only she hasn’t been KILLED yet despite being immortal. Hers isn’t a “conceptual” immortality like Shrodinger’s from Hellsing, so maybe a strong-enough Force Technique or a Thought Bomb could take her out. Jaune thinking Qrow and Tai are in a same-sex relationship, I wonder if that’ll get back to his mom since he got “corrupted” WAY before going off with the drunkard. As for what he found of Summer’s… Mayne something LIKE a Khyber Crystal, though there’s way too little evidence to tell. I’m eager to see more of him with Ruby and Yang, though I wonder what kind of romance he’ll pursue once his current body starts swimming in hormones.
Great story. Eager to read more.
8/10/2021 c5 NewMystery356
I don’t think his mom can complain about Jaune “losing his innocence” since SHE’S the one who sent him out in the first place… Oh well, at least he isn’t gonna be IGNORANT any longer; if Knowledge is Power, Ignorance is Weakness.
8/10/2021 c4 NewMystery356
It occurs to me that if Jaune just shaved his head that MIGHT help with the Crossdressing Disease; sure, they COULD put a wig over it, but the APPROACH is where they could be dissuaded. As for Qtow at the end, I got some very strong Fred Flindstone vibes at that last bit.
8/10/2021 c3 NewMystery356
I’m not sure what I’m worried about more; that Qrow knows Jaune/Galen’s secret shame, or that he recreationally peeps into teenage girls’ windows…
8/10/2021 c2 NewMystery356
So they’re like two co-pilots then… Well, better than it being a “re-skin” story, which tend to feel kind of lazy. Glad to see there are those that hold mistrust for that body-snatcher; I wonder if Galen could force him out if he tried for a newer… “domestic” model.
8/10/2021 c1 NewMystery356
Geez, how the hell’d Palpatine even survive that…
Oh well, at least this time “Jaune” will EARN his way into Beacon, instead of lying and STEALING his way in. I assume.
8/5/2021 c4 Guest
You have somehow made every arc woman unlikable cunts. I don't know why westerners find women being assholes to be funny.
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