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1/21/2020 c1 14Data Seeker

You say your story idea is silly. But it’s a type of silly that appeals to me.

Anyway, the overall story with Elsia getting shrunk and Anne cares for her and take her royal duties is amusing. And the ending had a good twist to it.

The characterization, interactions and dialog of the two sisters is great. It’s great how Anna teases Elsa, but isn’t cruel in her teasing. It’s a great balance involving sibling relationships.

The trope behind Elsa’s shrinkage is believable and flows well.

The quality is good in many areas, good narration, emotion, humor, suspense, drama, complexity and scope. There are a few typos. But other then that, much of the writing is good.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean except for a two or three vulgar words.
That…joke Anna used is crude.

Other then that, the fic is clean.

I hope you like this review though there is some criticism. God bless

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3/24/2019 c1 eacox1787
This story is perfect, cute size-changing shenanigans are always fun! However, why do Elsa and Anna swear mention Odin in their exclamations even though Frozen is set well into the Christian era?
11/2/2018 c1 Guest
Amazing story I love how Anna is so in character
10/7/2017 c1 Tyler currie
It is a very good fun short little story
10/6/2017 c1 137Invader Johnny
Heh heh, well Anna had her fun, unfortunately for Elsa her time as the "little sister" is far from over.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

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