for The Coming2/10/2019 c14 Squirrelstar
Why? WHY DID OWL DIE? Wait did he really die or was that just a dream
Why? WHY DID OWL DIE? Wait did he really die or was that just a dream
2/1/2019 c25 POST ALREADY
*GROAN* When is the next chapter coming out?! I NEED MORE! i NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...wut huppins nuxt? POST ALREADY! NEED NEXT CHAPTER!
*GROAN* When is the next chapter coming out?! I NEED MORE! i NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...wut huppins nuxt? POST ALREADY! NEED NEXT CHAPTER!
1/13/2019 c6 
3phoenix.dragoon.05
This is my second time reading this and it’s as good as befor before which is saying something because I hate rereading books because I know what will happen
3phoenix.dragoon.05This is my second time reading this and it’s as good as befor before which is saying something because I hate rereading books because I know what will happen
12/5/2018 c25 phoenix.dragoon.05
Hey! I’m loving the story so far and hope u post the next chapter soon. U have good story telling skills and lol now I’m rambling I’m just going to say keep it up XD
Hey! I’m loving the story so far and hope u post the next chapter soon. U have good story telling skills and lol now I’m rambling I’m just going to say keep it up XD
12/5/2018 c25 Frost
I love this chapter! Keep up the good work!
I love this chapter! Keep up the good work!
11/30/2018 c22 phoenix.dragoon.05
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Don’t get me wrong i love the story just...
Wow... just thought she was better
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Don’t get me wrong i love the story just...
Wow... just thought she was better
11/30/2018 c25 6Chickenspoon42
HOW DARE I HAVE WAITED SO LONG TO READ THIS THE RWBY REFERANCES I HAVE A NEW BEST FRIEND AAAAAAAAA
Also CinderxEmerald for life have you not seen V6 yet. And Roman's a lone wolf boio.
Are you a first member? I'm not, so no spoilers. Do you watch EruptionFang or Unicorn of War? Do you ship Bumblebee? Do you read Coeur Al'Aran? Do you watch RVB?
Got that out of my system...
Jk I am the most hyped I've ever been on anything ever.
6Chickenspoon42HOW DARE I HAVE WAITED SO LONG TO READ THIS THE RWBY REFERANCES I HAVE A NEW BEST FRIEND AAAAAAAAA
Also CinderxEmerald for life have you not seen V6 yet. And Roman's a lone wolf boio.
Are you a first member? I'm not, so no spoilers. Do you watch EruptionFang or Unicorn of War? Do you ship Bumblebee? Do you read Coeur Al'Aran? Do you watch RVB?
Got that out of my system...
Jk I am the most hyped I've ever been on anything ever.
10/21/2018 c23 Olivefur
HOW STINKN LONG UNTIL SPARKY AND CASPER AND PERKY UNITE?! I NEED TO KNOW!
I'm so tired.
HOW STINKN LONG UNTIL SPARKY AND CASPER AND PERKY UNITE?! I NEED TO KNOW!
I'm so tired.
10/21/2018 c23 Frost
Sorry I haven't reviews in a while, but I am still reading your story. I think it's great so far and can't wait for the next chapter! Good job by the way for capturing Torch's personality (and short fused temper) so well.
~ Frost
Sorry I haven't reviews in a while, but I am still reading your story. I think it's great so far and can't wait for the next chapter! Good job by the way for capturing Torch's personality (and short fused temper) so well.
~ Frost
10/14/2018 c22 Chickenspoon42
Fair enough. If you've done what you've gotta do, then you've done what you gotta do. No sense in pushing yourself further.
But of a harsh move, though. And the wholehearted hatred for dogs makes its appearance again. Sam doesn't deserve it, the poor thing- I just wanna hug him.
I'm guessing that's Spark for a while until she's hungry and fighting and arguing and says "you know what, technically this isn't freedom, cuz there's still a big stone wall with dogs guarding it that we can't cross" or something like that.
Fair enough. If you've done what you've gotta do, then you've done what you gotta do. No sense in pushing yourself further.
But of a harsh move, though. And the wholehearted hatred for dogs makes its appearance again. Sam doesn't deserve it, the poor thing- I just wanna hug him.
I'm guessing that's Spark for a while until she's hungry and fighting and arguing and says "you know what, technically this isn't freedom, cuz there's still a big stone wall with dogs guarding it that we can't cross" or something like that.
10/12/2018 c21 9NovaSpritWolf
YAY! Now Casper's back, Owl has her brother, and everything is AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE! Can't wait for more :) :) :)
9NovaSpritWolfYAY! Now Casper's back, Owl has her brother, and everything is AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE! Can't wait for more :) :) :)
10/11/2018 c21 6Chickenspoon42
Hey, who doesn't love angst? Maybe it's my inner fourteen year old talking, but I'm a sucker for those situations.
I think I'm going to look back at all of your chapters to properly read the little snippets you put just before your name. I really can't believe I haven't noticed them until now. They're such a cool touch!
6Chickenspoon42Hey, who doesn't love angst? Maybe it's my inner fourteen year old talking, but I'm a sucker for those situations.
I think I'm going to look back at all of your chapters to properly read the little snippets you put just before your name. I really can't believe I haven't noticed them until now. They're such a cool touch!
10/10/2018 c20 Chickenspoon42
Now I feel really bad for the rebellion...
But also over the moon that Sam's coming with us! He's just adorable. And the way Mr ball-of-pent-up-teen-angst relented way simply adorable.
On a slightly more "that ****" note, that ****. Seriously, what the flip, Chase? I suppose he's ignorant, but still. Maybe listen to what happens more when you ship your entire family off.
Now I feel really bad for the rebellion...
But also over the moon that Sam's coming with us! He's just adorable. And the way Mr ball-of-pent-up-teen-angst relented way simply adorable.
On a slightly more "that ****" note, that ****. Seriously, what the flip, Chase? I suppose he's ignorant, but still. Maybe listen to what happens more when you ship your entire family off.
10/9/2018 c20 3Timewing
I was laughing at when Bubbles said that Venus was quite talkative and I was just like "oh my god I have such an amazing friend and they are absolutely hilarious!"
3TimewingI was laughing at when Bubbles said that Venus was quite talkative and I was just like "oh my god I have such an amazing friend and they are absolutely hilarious!"
10/7/2018 c19 6Chickenspoon42
*claps* Hey. Write this!
In all honesty, I didn't expect the Clans to be involved. Like, I know it says "warrior cats" in the title, but I thought it simply took place in their universe. Also would you care to give a timeline? When does this fic take place?
Who cares how long it takes? Just shows the time put into each chapter. I've been writing for six years and I've barely finished anything. I just like exploring. So what if I can't find my way back?
6Chickenspoon42*claps* Hey. Write this!
In all honesty, I didn't expect the Clans to be involved. Like, I know it says "warrior cats" in the title, but I thought it simply took place in their universe. Also would you care to give a timeline? When does this fic take place?
Who cares how long it takes? Just shows the time put into each chapter. I've been writing for six years and I've barely finished anything. I just like exploring. So what if I can't find my way back?