for The Unexpected10/16/2019 c11 Daenerys T. Potter
Supposedly, in the future, Daphne gets Harry so wrapped around her finger that he will commit murder for her. Future Harry made that sound like that was such a big deal for him, which clearly it wasn’t. Harry had no remorse for what he did at Azkaban, so obviously murder doesn’t even phase him in the slightest. Besides, ironically, Harry is the only one that ever did anything bad enough to Daphne for her to want him dead, and yet it is obvious she is falling for him, much as I don’t see why. In my opinion, Harry is far too selfish to make a good boyfriend, husband, friend or even human being. He even had the gall to laugh at her for the situation he put her in. Yeah, he meant that apology he gave her way back when, just as much as he meant the ‘sorry’ he gave the guard at Azkaban, which is not at all. I hope in the end, Daphne manages to ruin Harry’s life just as much as he ruined hers. I am pretty sure this request will fall on deaf ears, but please continue soon.
Supposedly, in the future, Daphne gets Harry so wrapped around her finger that he will commit murder for her. Future Harry made that sound like that was such a big deal for him, which clearly it wasn’t. Harry had no remorse for what he did at Azkaban, so obviously murder doesn’t even phase him in the slightest. Besides, ironically, Harry is the only one that ever did anything bad enough to Daphne for her to want him dead, and yet it is obvious she is falling for him, much as I don’t see why. In my opinion, Harry is far too selfish to make a good boyfriend, husband, friend or even human being. He even had the gall to laugh at her for the situation he put her in. Yeah, he meant that apology he gave her way back when, just as much as he meant the ‘sorry’ he gave the guard at Azkaban, which is not at all. I hope in the end, Daphne manages to ruin Harry’s life just as much as he ruined hers. I am pretty sure this request will fall on deaf ears, but please continue soon.
9/14/2019 c7 Guest
Daenerys, nah, I don't buy that. He has yet to do a single unselfish thing in the entire story. He may have talked sweetly to Daphne, once, but his words mean nothing. He doesn't keep his word, nor does he mean what he says anyway.
I think Daphne should have told her parents the whole truth. They couldn't really get mad at her for something that wasn't her fault. I suspect they would have been furious at the school and probably demand Professor Snape be fired for allowing that to happen in his classroom. I hope in the end, they find out who made that potion in the first place and that person gets severely punished as that potion has only one true purpose to commit rape.
Daenerys, nah, I don't buy that. He has yet to do a single unselfish thing in the entire story. He may have talked sweetly to Daphne, once, but his words mean nothing. He doesn't keep his word, nor does he mean what he says anyway.
I think Daphne should have told her parents the whole truth. They couldn't really get mad at her for something that wasn't her fault. I suspect they would have been furious at the school and probably demand Professor Snape be fired for allowing that to happen in his classroom. I hope in the end, they find out who made that potion in the first place and that person gets severely punished as that potion has only one true purpose to commit rape.
9/11/2019 c6 Daenerys T. Potter
guest reviewer, I see your point, but worst boyfriend ever might be a bit of an exaggeration, but not totally false. Who knows? It might have been just the opposite and he did lots of research during that two days that was skipped and only learned that about using magic being bad for her recently, but if that were true, I think there would have been some indication like an apology for teaching her the other spell, or at least the mention of his thought regretting that decision, but where there wasn’t, you are probably right.
Oh, and good chapter. Give them bad news on Christmas day. She sure knows how to ruin the holidays.
guest reviewer, I see your point, but worst boyfriend ever might be a bit of an exaggeration, but not totally false. Who knows? It might have been just the opposite and he did lots of research during that two days that was skipped and only learned that about using magic being bad for her recently, but if that were true, I think there would have been some indication like an apology for teaching her the other spell, or at least the mention of his thought regretting that decision, but where there wasn’t, you are probably right.
Oh, and good chapter. Give them bad news on Christmas day. She sure knows how to ruin the holidays.
9/10/2019 c5 guest
Daenerys - I already answered that in one of my previous reviews. To put it bluntly, if I were Daphne, I would not have said ‘are you always going to be this protective,’ except maybe in the most sarcastic way possible. ‘Are you always going to be such a bastard?’ would have been more appropriate. It was such a lie on Harry’s part to even pretend he cared about her with the it is too draining on you nonsense. He didn’t give a damn about that when he taught her the spell to heal his hand in the previous chapter. As far as not teaching her the Patronus charm, Harry’s only motive was the selfish and whiney ‘but I need a spell to myself.’ When it is in his favor, sure he will share, but otherwise, he doesn’t care. Worst boyfriend ever. I suspect those murders he spoke of that were supposedly done for her, will likewise be purely self-serving.
Daenerys - I already answered that in one of my previous reviews. To put it bluntly, if I were Daphne, I would not have said ‘are you always going to be this protective,’ except maybe in the most sarcastic way possible. ‘Are you always going to be such a bastard?’ would have been more appropriate. It was such a lie on Harry’s part to even pretend he cared about her with the it is too draining on you nonsense. He didn’t give a damn about that when he taught her the spell to heal his hand in the previous chapter. As far as not teaching her the Patronus charm, Harry’s only motive was the selfish and whiney ‘but I need a spell to myself.’ When it is in his favor, sure he will share, but otherwise, he doesn’t care. Worst boyfriend ever. I suspect those murders he spoke of that were supposedly done for her, will likewise be purely self-serving.
9/10/2019 c5 Daenerys T. Potter
at the previous guest reviewer, what are you talking about? How was that proven?
at the previous guest reviewer, what are you talking about? How was that proven?
9/7/2019 c5 guest
I reread some of this story and something I overlooked before just jumped out at me. “After all the people I’ve killed for you.” On the surface, this would suggest that future Daphne talked Harry into committing murders for her. I don’t buy that as being true. Thus far, there has been nothing in Daphne’s personality to suggest she is a murderer at heart. All she wanted was to please her father after she already ‘failed’ him with the unwanted sexual encounter with Harry and to up the status of her best friend Tracey.
Harry has already proven he won’t do anything for Daphne unless it suits his own selfish purposes. I suspect these so-called murders done for her will prove to be a similar situation, IF there was any truth to that vision in the first place. Yes, I have read the entire story, thus far and Harry has also proven his word means nothing and committing murder likewise means nothing to him. I suspect if this story gets continued at all, which I doubt it will, Harry will just selfishly stay at Hogwarts putting everyone at risk of what happened at Azkaban happening again here.
I reread some of this story and something I overlooked before just jumped out at me. “After all the people I’ve killed for you.” On the surface, this would suggest that future Daphne talked Harry into committing murders for her. I don’t buy that as being true. Thus far, there has been nothing in Daphne’s personality to suggest she is a murderer at heart. All she wanted was to please her father after she already ‘failed’ him with the unwanted sexual encounter with Harry and to up the status of her best friend Tracey.
Harry has already proven he won’t do anything for Daphne unless it suits his own selfish purposes. I suspect these so-called murders done for her will prove to be a similar situation, IF there was any truth to that vision in the first place. Yes, I have read the entire story, thus far and Harry has also proven his word means nothing and committing murder likewise means nothing to him. I suspect if this story gets continued at all, which I doubt it will, Harry will just selfishly stay at Hogwarts putting everyone at risk of what happened at Azkaban happening again here.
8/16/2019 c12 Guess
I and many others would appreciate a continuation on this story.
I and many others would appreciate a continuation on this story.
8/3/2019 c12 guest
Read the whole thing. I hope it hasn’t been abandoned. It has been over a year and it is way past June. Me thinks Harry is a ticking timebomb, probably exactly what his future-self wanted – the destruction of Azkaban and Hogwarts. I guess we will never know.
Read the whole thing. I hope it hasn’t been abandoned. It has been over a year and it is way past June. Me thinks Harry is a ticking timebomb, probably exactly what his future-self wanted – the destruction of Azkaban and Hogwarts. I guess we will never know.
4/7/2019 c1 guest
soniasingh25150 - I wouldn’t call any story that is easily in the top 5 percent in favors, follows and reviews a ‘super flop.’ I also wouldn’t take that seriously from someone who has not a single story to his or her name.
Top 5 percent - reviews - 126, favorites -161, follows - 118
soniasingh25150 - I wouldn’t call any story that is easily in the top 5 percent in favors, follows and reviews a ‘super flop.’ I also wouldn’t take that seriously from someone who has not a single story to his or her name.
Top 5 percent - reviews - 126, favorites -161, follows - 118
4/6/2019 c12 Sonia25
I ma glad this ff is super flop because harry 's character is most stupid he is being manipulated and he knows it yet he trust everyone oh his so called novelty and bravery lol
I ma glad this ff is super flop because harry 's character is most stupid he is being manipulated and he knows it yet he trust everyone oh his so called novelty and bravery lol
4/6/2019 c9 Sonia25
What kind of stupid ff this is and when is harry gonna be powerful when he is 50 and is it harry potter fiction at all? Because I am seeing everyone else except harry
What kind of stupid ff this is and when is harry gonna be powerful when he is 50 and is it harry potter fiction at all? Because I am seeing everyone else except harry
2/14/2019 c10 guest
With the kangaroo court justice of wizarding world, I doubt Harry and Sirius Black were the only ones to be locked up there that didn’t deserve to be there. Harry committed mass murder and had no guilt what so ever over what he had done? I think I see where this story is going. I hope Dumbledore and Daphne realize how evil Harry has become before it is too late.
With the kangaroo court justice of wizarding world, I doubt Harry and Sirius Black were the only ones to be locked up there that didn’t deserve to be there. Harry committed mass murder and had no guilt what so ever over what he had done? I think I see where this story is going. I hope Dumbledore and Daphne realize how evil Harry has become before it is too late.
2/5/2019 c4 Guest
For a girl who is supposedly just using Harry, healing his hand was a pretty nice thing to do. I suspect she isn’t really using him at all. She only told her friends that, so she doesn’t get harassed for dating the ‘squib.’ Unfortunately for her, Harry is just using her. If he truly cared about her and the baby, he wouldn’t have taught her the spell to heal his torn skin either since it could be dangerous for her and the baby. Katie called it right. Harry is just selfish and only truly cares about himself. Hopefully at some point, Daphne will be smart enough to realize it.
For a girl who is supposedly just using Harry, healing his hand was a pretty nice thing to do. I suspect she isn’t really using him at all. She only told her friends that, so she doesn’t get harassed for dating the ‘squib.’ Unfortunately for her, Harry is just using her. If he truly cared about her and the baby, he wouldn’t have taught her the spell to heal his torn skin either since it could be dangerous for her and the baby. Katie called it right. Harry is just selfish and only truly cares about himself. Hopefully at some point, Daphne will be smart enough to realize it.