
10/13/2017 c3 Shen1412 - Formerly Enigma95
why tatsuo? where did he pick up that name?
also why seperate into 3 to 4 parts? just wondering
her telling him she has a fiance? HA now even mroe reason why would he uhh go for her?
well i look forward pre-timeskip series for a while especially him meeting with other people who are the younger version of themselves mwahahaahahahaa
why tatsuo? where did he pick up that name?
also why seperate into 3 to 4 parts? just wondering
her telling him she has a fiance? HA now even mroe reason why would he uhh go for her?
well i look forward pre-timeskip series for a while especially him meeting with other people who are the younger version of themselves mwahahaahahahaa
10/13/2017 c3
3kamikage86
Keep up the updates, this is going very well, but also continue your other MKnR stories please.

Keep up the updates, this is going very well, but also continue your other MKnR stories please.
10/13/2017 c3 Akuha
you have noctis founded a company, with the technology of your world. I also want to see the reaction of Maya when she learns that the powers of noctis are hereditary
you have noctis founded a company, with the technology of your world. I also want to see the reaction of Maya when she learns that the powers of noctis are hereditary
10/12/2017 c2 Akuha
by chance Noctis will still have its contracts with the Astral
by chance Noctis will still have its contracts with the Astral
10/12/2017 c1 Akuha
Great, please let Noctis and Maya be Tatsuya's parents. while Noctis has Miyuki with Miya.
Great, please let Noctis and Maya be Tatsuya's parents. while Noctis has Miyuki with Miya.
10/12/2017 c2 primus101
Excellent! Still some minor grammar issues but your looking for a beta, so don’t worry too much. I like how this is progressing so far and if you can keep up this update speed, that is even better. So a post-ffxv Noctis huh, I wonder what happened that caused him to be on Earth now?
Excellent! Still some minor grammar issues but your looking for a beta, so don’t worry too much. I like how this is progressing so far and if you can keep up this update speed, that is even better. So a post-ffxv Noctis huh, I wonder what happened that caused him to be on Earth now?
10/12/2017 c2 Shen1412 - Formerly Enigma95
No name for the cute little dog like pet?
Also... So short yet so exciting would be nc if it was longer but oh well
Question is how many more chapters before he meets the main clan and next chapter is prob still prologue...
No name for the cute little dog like pet?
Also... So short yet so exciting would be nc if it was longer but oh well
Question is how many more chapters before he meets the main clan and next chapter is prob still prologue...
10/12/2017 c2 edboy4926
Good chapter
Since this is post game Noctis, does he have all the Royal Weapons, including the ring?
Can’t wait to see Maya’s reaction when he uses his weapons, or summons.
Good chapter
Since this is post game Noctis, does he have all the Royal Weapons, including the ring?
Can’t wait to see Maya’s reaction when he uses his weapons, or summons.