for It's the Apex Predator11/13/2017 c1 Kochabilka
Very interesting, very creative! They should go back and kill the damn wolves! They've proven they're worthless anyway! ;-)
Very interesting, very creative! They should go back and kill the damn wolves! They've proven they're worthless anyway! ;-)
10/21/2017 c1 
5Bell 1
This was a strange OS. I'm not sure I completely liked it, but I believe that is mainly due to the majority of it being so dark and shroud in "what the heck is going on" mystery. All-in-all, it wasn't bad, just different. I suppose what would have made it a bit more enjoyable - for me that is - would be if there were a bit more of the happy or good part of the story at the end. Granted, I am happy it did end well, but a little more of the good might have balanced out the story a little more for my taste, but my taste isn't necessarily the same as another's preference. Again, not a bad story though. :)
5Bell 1This was a strange OS. I'm not sure I completely liked it, but I believe that is mainly due to the majority of it being so dark and shroud in "what the heck is going on" mystery. All-in-all, it wasn't bad, just different. I suppose what would have made it a bit more enjoyable - for me that is - would be if there were a bit more of the happy or good part of the story at the end. Granted, I am happy it did end well, but a little more of the good might have balanced out the story a little more for my taste, but my taste isn't necessarily the same as another's preference. Again, not a bad story though. :)
10/16/2017 c1 TrueSkye
What a total mind flip! Now THAT was something so completely different and foreign from the usual. Deliciously dark, but still with a happy Jasper/Bella ending.
Brilliant. Absolutely LOVED it.
What a total mind flip! Now THAT was something so completely different and foreign from the usual. Deliciously dark, but still with a happy Jasper/Bella ending.
Brilliant. Absolutely LOVED it.