for Blood Magic6/6/2021 c5 michelle.stein
Their friendship is so sweet and sincere. I love the way you built up their intimacy and shared solitude. Just beautiful.
Their friendship is so sweet and sincere. I love the way you built up their intimacy and shared solitude. Just beautiful.
11/17/2020 c46 
4David Fishwick
excellent idea and thanks for writing this story. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Draco and Hermione
4David Fishwickexcellent idea and thanks for writing this story. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Draco and Hermione
5/26/2020 c25 MotekElm
I'm betting this was written. somewhere near the Southern border of the US, like Texas or NM. it has a HS Southwest vibe. does the UK have taco trucks?
I'm betting this was written. somewhere near the Southern border of the US, like Texas or NM. it has a HS Southwest vibe. does the UK have taco trucks?
5/25/2020 c16 MotekElm
sometimes this reads like this was written by someone translating a story into English. small strange grammar, and things like "courses" instead of period or cycle or monthly...
sometimes this reads like this was written by someone translating a story into English. small strange grammar, and things like "courses" instead of period or cycle or monthly...
5/25/2020 c12 MotekElm
sweet. I like that Draco is trying to make up for his poor behavior and woo her
sweet. I like that Draco is trying to make up for his poor behavior and woo her
5/25/2020 c11 MotekElm
I like this fic.
I don't like Hermione's clingyness and insecurities taking over. or how she constantly returns to Draco despite him not changing. it's unusual that the war didn't change his opinions and stance on his family.
but the writing is good, so l will keep reading.
I like this fic.
I don't like Hermione's clingyness and insecurities taking over. or how she constantly returns to Draco despite him not changing. it's unusual that the war didn't change his opinions and stance on his family.
but the writing is good, so l will keep reading.