for Blood Magic3/19/2019 c30 Guest
I thought the plot itself was great but it seemed to get lost as an after thought, there was way to much attention on the relationships of absolutely everyone, the Paris bit was long an tedious along with the details of hermione's and theo's wardrobe. Hermione came across as needy and desperate, begging Draco to want her and practically begging sex of him, very ooc. I found myself skipping big bits trying to get back to the actual plot which in itself was good. These are British characters and the constant I want you, I love you, you make everything look good was unrealistic.
I thought the plot itself was great but it seemed to get lost as an after thought, there was way to much attention on the relationships of absolutely everyone, the Paris bit was long an tedious along with the details of hermione's and theo's wardrobe. Hermione came across as needy and desperate, begging Draco to want her and practically begging sex of him, very ooc. I found myself skipping big bits trying to get back to the actual plot which in itself was good. These are British characters and the constant I want you, I love you, you make everything look good was unrealistic.
2/21/2019 c9 drucindastorm
merlin this is brilliant. the plot is unique the chemist is great and this book is just AMAZING
merlin this is brilliant. the plot is unique the chemist is great and this book is just AMAZING
2/10/2019 c46 
3shaila22star
Oh! This story is so awesome. One of my favourite. Write more like this.. best wishes for you...
3shaila22starOh! This story is so awesome. One of my favourite. Write more like this.. best wishes for you...
2/5/2019 c9 FriendofTrees
I'm a little confused on why Draco keeps pushing her away, but I imagine that will be explained. I really like all the characters and their interactions! It is so fun!
I'm a little confused on why Draco keeps pushing her away, but I imagine that will be explained. I really like all the characters and their interactions! It is so fun!
12/17/2018 c47 GryffindorSorted
What a lovely story. Made me laugh, cry and stay up too late reading. I love the friendships in here and the romances. Theo and Hermione are definitely friendship goals. Such a great read.
What a lovely story. Made me laugh, cry and stay up too late reading. I love the friendships in here and the romances. Theo and Hermione are definitely friendship goals. Such a great read.
12/1/2018 c41 Hotmamantx
Omg ! This was a wonderful thrill ride of a story , I love all the extra parings . Can't wait to see what other stories you have
Omg ! This was a wonderful thrill ride of a story , I love all the extra parings . Can't wait to see what other stories you have
11/30/2018 c8 1March Of Folly
The dialogue between Draco and Hermoine in this chapter is awkward and doean't flow. Just a thought.
1March Of FollyThe dialogue between Draco and Hermoine in this chapter is awkward and doean't flow. Just a thought.
10/5/2018 c1 2PurplePhoenixx
your story was so well done. I enjoyed every moment reading it! thankyou for sharing it
2PurplePhoenixxyour story was so well done. I enjoyed every moment reading it! thankyou for sharing it
8/17/2018 c46 3Xluv-hogwartsX
It was amazing. I was crying for some parts, thats how amazing it was, I really only cry at fred and George x
3Xluv-hogwartsXIt was amazing. I was crying for some parts, thats how amazing it was, I really only cry at fred and George x
7/18/2018 c46 35savedprincess85
This was brilliant! I loved it in so many ways. How Hermione interacts with Theo is probably my favorite. How Draco realized that everyone is drawn to her. It makes me happy!
35savedprincess85This was brilliant! I loved it in so many ways. How Hermione interacts with Theo is probably my favorite. How Draco realized that everyone is drawn to her. It makes me happy!