for Pudding by the Campfire8/22/2019 c1 KinkyAnonymously
And then I read this and proceeded to cry in confusion rather then the feels
And then I read this and proceeded to cry in confusion rather then the feels
4/6/2019 c1 Incognito FBI
*gasp*
*screaming*
Yang: BLAKE, HOW DID MY SIS GET YOUR BOOKS AND HOW DID SHE PULL THAT END LINE OFF?!
*gasp*
*screaming*
Yang: BLAKE, HOW DID MY SIS GET YOUR BOOKS AND HOW DID SHE PULL THAT END LINE OFF?!
1/19/2019 c1 YourPerplexedFan
My hardware(brain) is having trouble processing the data(story) you just presented to me. It seems to have indirectly caused insane amounts of input lag. I think I need a reboot(nap). Good night.
My hardware(brain) is having trouble processing the data(story) you just presented to me. It seems to have indirectly caused insane amounts of input lag. I think I need a reboot(nap). Good night.
9/10/2018 c1 Shadow Dawn
I-i-i... im so damned confused right now
I-i-i... im so damned confused right now
9/2/2018 c1 
1KingShade
hm hm hm hm-BRAGH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH
that wasthe funniest thing ever! thank you so much can you do sequel where we find out nora and ren followed them please HAHAAHAHHAHABAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
1KingShadehm hm hm hm-BRAGH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH
that wasthe funniest thing ever! thank you so much can you do sequel where we find out nora and ren followed them please HAHAAHAHHAHABAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
5/4/2018 c1 Blazeraptor54
The hint game is strong with Ruby.
The hint game is strong with Ruby.
3/14/2018 c1 BannerHulk123
Im, i am at just a complete loss for words there is nothing in my rather extensive vocabulary that can put into perspective what im thinking reading this.
Im, i am at just a complete loss for words there is nothing in my rather extensive vocabulary that can put into perspective what im thinking reading this.
10/20/2017 c1 scottusa1
This has to be the strangest RWBY story I've ever read, I thought it was pretty funny. Have a good one. Laters.
This has to be the strangest RWBY story I've ever read, I thought it was pretty funny. Have a good one. Laters.
10/19/2017 c1 marvin12mcm
I have no words to express how I feel about this, it was hilariously entertaining to read, I do look forward to your other works
I have no words to express how I feel about this, it was hilariously entertaining to read, I do look forward to your other works
10/18/2017 c1 5The Pack
This definitely could have been something more. It's too short! It needs to be longer. A full fledged lemon. It doesn't need to be a huge story, but man was this leaving me wanting more. While the banana and chocolate talk was kind of silly and somewhat true to their characters, I personally can't get turned on by it XD I do believe you posses the power to write an amazing story with just this mini story. I thank you for the quick read, and hope to see more by you in the future.
5The PackThis definitely could have been something more. It's too short! It needs to be longer. A full fledged lemon. It doesn't need to be a huge story, but man was this leaving me wanting more. While the banana and chocolate talk was kind of silly and somewhat true to their characters, I personally can't get turned on by it XD I do believe you posses the power to write an amazing story with just this mini story. I thank you for the quick read, and hope to see more by you in the future.