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12/12/2021 c34 2NightBlossom
This is a fantastic story, really creative and well done. I’ve really enjoyed it and I hope you see it through! You deserve to be proud of a final finished product! Phenomenal work so far.
12/11/2021 c34 bookishlady09
Please update soon. This story lives in my brain
12/4/2021 c34 Cynfulme
This story has been absolutely fantastic. I haven’t checked your homepage, but I am hoping you will someday update this one. I really appreciate your talent. Thanks for writing!
12/1/2021 c34 Guest
I'm hopeful that your muse turns her eyes to this story again. You have created such a lovely world and (imo) stayed true to the characters and I adore you for it! Ty ty ty!
11/24/2021 c34 35SharonH
There is so much I want to say. Read this a few times. Didn’t want to miss anything. I’ve commented before but it deserves so much more.
11/17/2021 c34 SharonH
I love this. I hope you update. I need to know what happened with Dacey. She makes me so sad. I really hope Hermione marries Robb. You’ve got me hooked!
11/10/2021 c34 Shinonome Sakuya
this is such a great story! I hope you continue it soon! I enjoy many of ur stories!
10/22/2021 c34 Guest
This is literally the best crossover fic I’ve read in my life! I was so hooked I binged the whole thing in 2 nights it was that amazing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
10/22/2021 c1 4KnocturnWitch
Thank the Old gods for your marking habits. This is wonderful <3
10/19/2021 c34 SlytherinCaptain7
Please please please please PLEASE UPDATE! This story is so good its ridiculous! Seriously CANNOT wait for an update!
10/17/2021 c34 Relim
I finally sat down to read this and I could barely tear myself away. I look forward to what you put out next. :)
9/20/2021 c34 1Dwagner1003
The pack is coming back together! Please keep updating, this is a binge read kind of story
9/7/2021 c4 nessiesmith2012
naive hermione even after all that. she is aware of it being different times and world but with her rosy glasses that magically still in tact cause... author wanted a naive hermione? i mean she out grew that before the books ended...when games of thrones "small folk" or commoners are just as dirty as the kingslayer was.

author... you realize she was tortured and hunted down... right? And not to long ago if she isnt that much older than 17. ao why is hermione naive and blurting things like that? u gave a weak excuse of "mouth runs before her brain" but in the books she out grew that. yet she has no issue inviting strangers into her tent. blabbing that she is from another world. and butting in when she has no place. i was hoping for a mature after war hemione. this is not her. its like you took naive blabber mouth 12 yr old hermione and aged her for romance sake.

but i may be to hash. maybe it gets better and she stops blabbing her secrets and "ideas" on how things should be.
9/6/2021 c34 9Howard blake
I have to say this is an entertaining story to find. It's a breathe of fresh air for someone other than Harry Potter to find their way into Westeros. Hermione's smarts brings in a new dynamic that is interesting to read about.

I'd like to point out the pacing of the plot. It feels as if you're skipping or at least fast forwarding too much. Also you rely too much on canon events as your guide. It's kind of boring to rehash old dialogue from the show and you're free to paraphrase a few things. People already KNOW what happened and what the characters said in the show, no need to copy paste it. That whole scene with Danaerys and Tyrion is the exam same with little to no divergence except for the fact that Vary's was there, they talked about Hermione for a bit, and you basically skipped his journey across Essos. You could have skipped the scene entirely and it wouldn't have made a difference in that chapter.

The things I like about this story are the fresh and original scenes you put in. Use canon as a guide but don't be afraid to be flexible with it. You don't need the exact dialogue people use in the episode. Go off the beaten path but use it as reference.

All things considered, it's still a good fic. Keep it up
9/3/2021 c15 fatandsquat
Attack on Harrenhal: magical wolves scared hundreds.
Finding Kingslayer: oh no there are 20 of them i should totally wait so Brienne can have some more scars and hopefully Jaime loses his hand. Now that's when i will summon the wolves. What about tea party in the meantime Torrhen and Dacey?
Inconsistent AF.
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