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12/24/2017 c2 XTheBloodyFoxX
Can’t wait for next update. Keep up the awesome work.
10/18/2017 c2 Guest
This story is good so far, I always love stories with the North American twins in them (especially Canada :3) but I also come with a few pointers. You should try changing the format a bit, like instead of a big cluster of words, you space them out a bit into their own paragraphs. The speech format is also a little messy. If characters are in a conversation, you can try giving the speech their own space as well, which makes it easier to read. Other than that, I really like it! Keep up the good work, mate! :3

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