for Toye12/7/2017 c5 Guest
I could barely blink during Emmett's game. Rosalie, xoxoxo.
Bella has hope, and an apple. Edward can get her out alive!
I could barely blink during Emmett's game. Rosalie, xoxoxo.
Bella has hope, and an apple. Edward can get her out alive!
12/7/2017 c4 Guest
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can't even type...reading...
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can't even type...reading...
12/7/2017 c3 Guest
Like a doll pulled by a reckless toddler, this story has me!
I love how Bella still has so much control, even in panic, she's keeping her wits about her.
Like a doll pulled by a reckless toddler, this story has me!
I love how Bella still has so much control, even in panic, she's keeping her wits about her.
12/7/2017 c2 Guest
Lucky shoes. Lucky Rosalie, finding two hot guys!
Wait...red eyes?
This is still probably fine. We are still having fun, right?
Lucky shoes. Lucky Rosalie, finding two hot guys!
Wait...red eyes?
This is still probably fine. We are still having fun, right?
12/7/2017 c1 Guest
I'm scared! Scared for those shoes! This is fun. We're having fun now!
I'm scared! Scared for those shoes! This is fun. We're having fun now!
11/17/2017 c7 hillybob
Eeeeek. You had me, I really thought he was a good guy... but then why did he have red eyes like the others! So clever thank you Hun xx
Eeeeek. You had me, I really thought he was a good guy... but then why did he have red eyes like the others! So clever thank you Hun xx
11/2/2017 c7 Guest
Well, you had me going until the very end. I really thought Edward would be different. Alas, that wasn't true.
That was one well-played story! Thanks!
Sally
Well, you had me going until the very end. I really thought Edward would be different. Alas, that wasn't true.
That was one well-played story! Thanks!
Sally
10/31/2017 c7 
4snoopylover60
That was crazy good. I loved it. Its more in line what I really think of vampires instead of the romantics Twilight made us believe.
4snoopylover60That was crazy good. I loved it. Its more in line what I really think of vampires instead of the romantics Twilight made us believe.
10/27/2017 c4 readicted
Oooh, sinister Carlisle. And how disturbing Jasper is licking all up Bella's bloody nostrils. Bonus, Emmett thoroughly licking out Jasper's oral cavity for a taste of Bella. .
Oooh, sinister Carlisle. And how disturbing Jasper is licking all up Bella's bloody nostrils. Bonus, Emmett thoroughly licking out Jasper's oral cavity for a taste of Bella. .
10/27/2017 c2 readicted
"Gorgeous and straight" -Loved that line. Couldn't figure out why Jasper's mood deteriorated after learning Bella was a virgin, but damn I wasn't expecting that reaction.
"Gorgeous and straight" -Loved that line. Couldn't figure out why Jasper's mood deteriorated after learning Bella was a virgin, but damn I wasn't expecting that reaction.