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for the dwarf veteran

10/19/2017 c1 Grey Day
This is a very interesting idea for a story! I'm afraid some of the formatting, such as the placement of quotation marks and line returns, has gone a bit awry. Perhaps a beta could help with that?
Making use of second person viewpoint is an uncommon choice; unfortunately, the guidelines (found at guidelines/ ) do not permit it. This is, however, a relatively easy thing to fix. You need only swap out the 'you's' for 'I' or perhaps your character's name and change a few very tenses.
I hope you continue uploading stories! This tale definitely has some potential.

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