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1/10/2018 c3 9sleep walker38
Might want to work on the length of your chapters, that and making sentences flow together better instead of outright stating one thing, then immediately ending the sentence and stating another.
10/19/2017 c1 Guest
I'm sure you will be very proud of this when it is all finished! Good fic so far.
10/20/2017 c1 5Hw231
good so far

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