
5/25 c1 EANID
good start but Makino is just extra, what is she even doing here. And talking about having crew with big dreams and having makino in it kinda doing oposite :/
good start but Makino is just extra, what is she even doing here. And talking about having crew with big dreams and having makino in it kinda doing oposite :/
5/24 c33
3jdboss1
Love this one of the best One piece stories ever
I still believe Nami should have had the Lightning power As Luffy Doesn't really use it And because it way to hide it I can understand thee logic Luffy users but yes there is a wasted Ability When Nami Personally to Week two receiving Damage
The CP9 air hopping abilities seems to be of a common
how the heck would the warlord not the Marines closely guarded technique?
I believe you've overused the jumping ability
even in the battle of whitebait only Marines and even then only a few used it on screen

Love this one of the best One piece stories ever
I still believe Nami should have had the Lightning power As Luffy Doesn't really use it And because it way to hide it I can understand thee logic Luffy users but yes there is a wasted Ability When Nami Personally to Week two receiving Damage
The CP9 air hopping abilities seems to be of a common
how the heck would the warlord not the Marines closely guarded technique?
I believe you've overused the jumping ability
even in the battle of whitebait only Marines and even then only a few used it on screen