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1trudny1
I really enjoyed those latests chapters, finally our MC was able to fight without holding back.
I look forward to the fallout from Impel Down arc; thanks for the chapter.
1trudny1I really enjoyed those latests chapters, finally our MC was able to fight without holding back.
I look forward to the fallout from Impel Down arc; thanks for the chapter.
11/19 c44 2banko54
You know even with Whitebeard's death I don't think the Marines can claim victory here. Honestly the only ones who can truly claim victory is Luffy and crew. They managed to break into impel down free Ace Garp and escape with everyone alive. But truthfully I think the Marines took the biggest losses here. I look forward to seeing how the world reacts to everything.
2banko54You know even with Whitebeard's death I don't think the Marines can claim victory here. Honestly the only ones who can truly claim victory is Luffy and crew. They managed to break into impel down free Ace Garp and escape with everyone alive. But truthfully I think the Marines took the biggest losses here. I look forward to seeing how the world reacts to everything.
11/19 c44 Agent Frank
I picked the perfect time to catch up to this story, my luck is better than I thought. Whitebeard got a fitting end and wow I didn't expect that to happen to Akainu. I liked all of Luffy's fights with the admirals but yeah my one gripe was how well some of the commanders performed against them in extended combat. Particularly the Kuzan situation. Also, I would liked to see more from Akainu, not just from a combat perspective and from his character.
Either way though you've officially changed Canon, it's going to be really interesting to see how you handle the second part of the story. Luffy is of course already strong enough for the New World but I'm guessing they are going to take at least 1 year break so that the crew can get stronger.
Also, Congrats on adding another member to your family.
I picked the perfect time to catch up to this story, my luck is better than I thought. Whitebeard got a fitting end and wow I didn't expect that to happen to Akainu. I liked all of Luffy's fights with the admirals but yeah my one gripe was how well some of the commanders performed against them in extended combat. Particularly the Kuzan situation. Also, I would liked to see more from Akainu, not just from a combat perspective and from his character.
Either way though you've officially changed Canon, it's going to be really interesting to see how you handle the second part of the story. Luffy is of course already strong enough for the New World but I'm guessing they are going to take at least 1 year break so that the crew can get stronger.
Also, Congrats on adding another member to your family.
11/19 c43 Agent Frank
Another really good chapter. I think you handled Kizaru vs Luffy really well, it felt like a solid and realistic way to portray their fight. It's not really a big deal but it does seem like Akainu and Aokiji were downgraded a fair bit. This version of Ace is clearly stronger than canon Ace, maybe even as strong as a first commander but even with an elemental advantage Kuzan would've have taken care of him by now. Commanders can't really last against focused admirals of that caliber for long. We even saw Akainu fight all of the whitebeards commanders at once and still have the advantage.
Another really good chapter. I think you handled Kizaru vs Luffy really well, it felt like a solid and realistic way to portray their fight. It's not really a big deal but it does seem like Akainu and Aokiji were downgraded a fair bit. This version of Ace is clearly stronger than canon Ace, maybe even as strong as a first commander but even with an elemental advantage Kuzan would've have taken care of him by now. Commanders can't really last against focused admirals of that caliber for long. We even saw Akainu fight all of the whitebeards commanders at once and still have the advantage.
11/18 c41 Agent Frank
This has been pretty good, you've had to change some power related things because of new info but for the most part I think you've handled that pretty well. The only thing that was slightly off was Doflamingo feeling like he could defeat Marco.
This has been pretty good, you've had to change some power related things because of new info but for the most part I think you've handled that pretty well. The only thing that was slightly off was Doflamingo feeling like he could defeat Marco.
11/16 c34 Agent Frank
I'm catching up, so based on the reviews this chapter was released mid 2022. If so, then I think it should be clear that Raffy isn't admiral level. The previous chapter did an excellent job at putting him at Yonko first mate level. This could also just be the POV of the character fooling me. I'm not sure how seriously we're supposed to take Raffy's assessment of how he would think against different characters. On another note, I think you're handling the Robin and Hancock situation well
I'm catching up, so based on the reviews this chapter was released mid 2022. If so, then I think it should be clear that Raffy isn't admiral level. The previous chapter did an excellent job at putting him at Yonko first mate level. This could also just be the POV of the character fooling me. I'm not sure how seriously we're supposed to take Raffy's assessment of how he would think against different characters. On another note, I think you're handling the Robin and Hancock situation well
11/15 c32 Agent Frank
Great chapter, it was cool to see him let loose, and the logia power really didn't disappoint. Lol now that we know more about Kuma, his death here is a lot sadder.
Great chapter, it was cool to see him let loose, and the logia power really didn't disappoint. Lol now that we know more about Kuma, his death here is a lot sadder.
11/7 c1 Guest
Im sorry but for me since you got there transports mixed up that just killed any interest in this story
Belldandy travels through mirrors not water
Urd travels through TVs not mirrors
Skuld travels through water
Im sorry but for me since you got there transports mixed up that just killed any interest in this story
Belldandy travels through mirrors not water
Urd travels through TVs not mirrors
Skuld travels through water
11/5 c34 Gilgamesh50
NGL, I feel
Like you make the female x female thing way too prominent. And I get it, it's Ranma and all that, but still, dude, reincarnated, and that's not enough to get rid of the curse. But you keep focusing on the female x female thing, and it's getting weird for me.
I'm interested in Luffy's story, bro. I know I sound like I'm against it, but I'm not.
It's just from my experience that every good One Piece fic with a harem focuses on female x female crazy stuff, and especially since this is a Ranma fic, it's even more so.
NGL, I feel
Like you make the female x female thing way too prominent. And I get it, it's Ranma and all that, but still, dude, reincarnated, and that's not enough to get rid of the curse. But you keep focusing on the female x female thing, and it's getting weird for me.
I'm interested in Luffy's story, bro. I know I sound like I'm against it, but I'm not.
It's just from my experience that every good One Piece fic with a harem focuses on female x female crazy stuff, and especially since this is a Ranma fic, it's even more so.
11/5 c34 Gilgamesh50
Somehow, in every fic of yours, the girls are into other girls. There's nothing wrong with it, but I've noticed it's a recurring theme. Also, it's kind of like every girlfriend of the MC is also into other girls, and normally that's a fantasy come true for Ken, but sometimes you want something just basic and simple.
Somehow, in every fic of yours, the girls are into other girls. There's nothing wrong with it, but I've noticed it's a recurring theme. Also, it's kind of like every girlfriend of the MC is also into other girls, and normally that's a fantasy come true for Ken, but sometimes you want something just basic and simple.
10/26 c18 5DD-Returns101
This is awesome. The I only thing I have to say is the water conundrum in these last few chapters. As it is shown in the anime and manga that water is not that effectiv against them. As long as they can stand they r good
5DD-Returns101This is awesome. The I only thing I have to say is the water conundrum in these last few chapters. As it is shown in the anime and manga that water is not that effectiv against them. As long as they can stand they r good
10/23 c38 irgendwe
At some point I have to say it
The story is good but these inconsitencies are anoying.
I get that some happen, it's understandable when you write something for over 5 years, but this is literally stated at the end of the last Chapter
Plus I just rembered that they have Ace's Vivre Card. They don't need the marines, they have his position and they don't need any current
At some point I have to say it
The story is good but these inconsitencies are anoying.
I get that some happen, it's understandable when you write something for over 5 years, but this is literally stated at the end of the last Chapter
Plus I just rembered that they have Ace's Vivre Card. They don't need the marines, they have his position and they don't need any current
10/7 c44 bastidaswilliam2005
Firs happy for your new son/daughter and every in between
Second thanks for this update waiting for the next chapter of this fic, filfy teacher, Heroes of the High Seas and A Third Path to the Future
Firs happy for your new son/daughter and every in between
Second thanks for this update waiting for the next chapter of this fic, filfy teacher, Heroes of the High Seas and A Third Path to the Future