
4/24/2018 c1 Guest
Fuck you
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4/17/2018 c7 AinzOoalGown's chosen
I can't wait until they meet Momon because I want to see if they suspect anything from him at all. I want to see how Momon will act around them and how it will end up.
I can't wait until they meet Momon because I want to see if they suspect anything from him at all. I want to see how Momon will act around them and how it will end up.
4/17/2018 c7
1Doommajor
OMG! No pressure but please hurry up with the next chapter. I am REALLY looking forward to their reaction when they reach the Sorcerous Kingdom. But, again, no pressure and no need to rush. Love your story so far *thumbs up*.
Just realized this might be my first review of this story so let me do an actual review. I like the characters you've created and how they view the Sorcerous Kingdom. I enjoy the flow in the stories and how you handle conversations. I will admit that you're also a great tease, which is what makes me so impatient for the next chapter.
I will admit that there are times that I feel like you may have done something better, but that I believe might just be personal preference.
Looking forward to more, keep up the good work.

OMG! No pressure but please hurry up with the next chapter. I am REALLY looking forward to their reaction when they reach the Sorcerous Kingdom. But, again, no pressure and no need to rush. Love your story so far *thumbs up*.
Just realized this might be my first review of this story so let me do an actual review. I like the characters you've created and how they view the Sorcerous Kingdom. I enjoy the flow in the stories and how you handle conversations. I will admit that you're also a great tease, which is what makes me so impatient for the next chapter.
I will admit that there are times that I feel like you may have done something better, but that I believe might just be personal preference.
Looking forward to more, keep up the good work.
4/16/2018 c7 RyuujiVantek
That lizardman and dwarf are in for a full sjrprise omce they enter the sorcerer kingdom amd see both lizardmen and dwarves walking side by side just like them.. oh how hypocritical of them to think just because the king of said country is an undead e cant rule living beings?
Oh how wrong they truly are.
That lizardman and dwarf are in for a full sjrprise omce they enter the sorcerer kingdom amd see both lizardmen and dwarves walking side by side just like them.. oh how hypocritical of them to think just because the king of said country is an undead e cant rule living beings?
Oh how wrong they truly are.
2/8/2018 c4
2Sasugasm
ilidio13: This is just me doing a terrible job at telling my story x) I feared to say too much. That's why I wanted to dive deep into the action and make an explanation throughout the rest of the chapters.
But, fear not, it's not like I would have forgotten about the whole intelligence of Nazarick - we ALL know they're not the standard villains. Plus Ainz is not the type to boldly attack a nation when he's still unaware of who was behind Shalltear's mind control. For example, do you think the hero's lack of fighting will in the last chapter was only due to the death of her friend? Or, how many guardians Ainz truly mobilized for this operation ? There is a lot of things that happened in the shadows back then, with the Miracle Knight being only a third goal.
Also - I can't remember if I already said that Ainz considers the MC a threat to Nazarick, but this is linked to the reason of how she managed to get out of his grip without being transformed into undead. It's not like Ainz would make the same mistake as he did with Khajit, would he ?
As for the first question: Yes ! This is a story where the hero meets Big Bad at the beginning but survives. And it's precisely why it becomes interesting. Because you know very well that, even through trials and tribulations, the hero cannot win this time.

ilidio13: This is just me doing a terrible job at telling my story x) I feared to say too much. That's why I wanted to dive deep into the action and make an explanation throughout the rest of the chapters.
But, fear not, it's not like I would have forgotten about the whole intelligence of Nazarick - we ALL know they're not the standard villains. Plus Ainz is not the type to boldly attack a nation when he's still unaware of who was behind Shalltear's mind control. For example, do you think the hero's lack of fighting will in the last chapter was only due to the death of her friend? Or, how many guardians Ainz truly mobilized for this operation ? There is a lot of things that happened in the shadows back then, with the Miracle Knight being only a third goal.
Also - I can't remember if I already said that Ainz considers the MC a threat to Nazarick, but this is linked to the reason of how she managed to get out of his grip without being transformed into undead. It's not like Ainz would make the same mistake as he did with Khajit, would he ?
As for the first question: Yes ! This is a story where the hero meets Big Bad at the beginning but survives. And it's precisely why it becomes interesting. Because you know very well that, even through trials and tribulations, the hero cannot win this time.
2/8/2018 c4 ilidio13
This was very good until the end that torpedoed canon. Was it written to achieve the classic "hero meets Big Bad at the beginning but survives and after trials and tribulations beats him"?
Why would the most feared PKer Guild wouldn't target the individuals that took out the Death Nights? Why didn't the Guild Master who has a skill called Dark Wisdom specifically ordered his Guardians to retrieve the body(ies) of those individuals for experiments, for the equipment and whatnot? Looks very amateurish for them and very convenient for the plot. Too convenient, IMO. A DEM to me.
This is the kind of fic that I like or at least, the kind of I fic I would publish: a story already planned out that is only missing the final touches. I wonder why such a glaring (to me, lol) fault was written in. There must be a plan. I will read the following chapters to see if I like it. Incomprehensible DEM aside, the story is very good.
This was very good until the end that torpedoed canon. Was it written to achieve the classic "hero meets Big Bad at the beginning but survives and after trials and tribulations beats him"?
Why would the most feared PKer Guild wouldn't target the individuals that took out the Death Nights? Why didn't the Guild Master who has a skill called Dark Wisdom specifically ordered his Guardians to retrieve the body(ies) of those individuals for experiments, for the equipment and whatnot? Looks very amateurish for them and very convenient for the plot. Too convenient, IMO. A DEM to me.
This is the kind of fic that I like or at least, the kind of I fic I would publish: a story already planned out that is only missing the final touches. I wonder why such a glaring (to me, lol) fault was written in. There must be a plan. I will read the following chapters to see if I like it. Incomprehensible DEM aside, the story is very good.
2/1/2018 c5 Daniel-palacio
ciertamente es una historia mui chebre sin duda pense que no continuaria pero me alegra espero con ansias el si siguente cap gracias por todo tus esfuerzos sin duda son lo mejor :)
ciertamente es una historia mui chebre sin duda pense que no continuaria pero me alegra espero con ansias el si siguente cap gracias por todo tus esfuerzos sin duda son lo mejor :)
2/1/2018 c6 Guest
really nice, please keep it up.
really nice, please keep it up.
2/1/2018 c6 RyuujiVantek
Is there even a single shred of chance of anyome in the nw that can beat nazarick?
I fuckin hope not.
Is there even a single shred of chance of anyome in the nw that can beat nazarick?
I fuckin hope not.
2/1/2018 c6
4PervySageChuck
Well, I can see it now in the next chapter...
This just in to the newsroom... An entire band of vicious bandits have been curbstomped, had the sh*t kicked out of them, been used to mop the floor, been beaten over the heads with their own ripped off arms...
...And for some strange reason, they were found with ripe pineapples shoved up their rectal orifices. Film at eleven. And now, back to our regularly scheduled program, already in progress.

Well, I can see it now in the next chapter...
This just in to the newsroom... An entire band of vicious bandits have been curbstomped, had the sh*t kicked out of them, been used to mop the floor, been beaten over the heads with their own ripped off arms...
...And for some strange reason, they were found with ripe pineapples shoved up their rectal orifices. Film at eleven. And now, back to our regularly scheduled program, already in progress.
2/1/2018 c6 shiroryuu012
oh how foolish these human they think they're gonna win although they just dance in ainz sama hand
oh how foolish these human they think they're gonna win although they just dance in ainz sama hand
11/8/2017 c1 amiao
Lol Karnassus-Darnassus I see what you did there. Also, do try to ignore a certain overly vocal commenter who is named after a sadistic nymphomaniacal vampire girl, that guy literally goes to every popular fanfic and trolls it.
Good work so far, some punctual and grammatical errors, but overly quite enjoyable.
Lol Karnassus-Darnassus I see what you did there. Also, do try to ignore a certain overly vocal commenter who is named after a sadistic nymphomaniacal vampire girl, that guy literally goes to every popular fanfic and trolls it.
Good work so far, some punctual and grammatical errors, but overly quite enjoyable.
11/7/2017 c5
3Mad-Dan90
Well, now. This was an interesting start to a story, and I rather like it. Although the protagonist seems a bit daft, I rather like her. She just needs some impulse control, with a dash of maturity. ;)
All in all, it was a good read and now I will patiently wait for more chapters. Although I still hope that you will also continue, "The Wolfpack". It's another one of my favorites. ;)
Until next time! :)

Well, now. This was an interesting start to a story, and I rather like it. Although the protagonist seems a bit daft, I rather like her. She just needs some impulse control, with a dash of maturity. ;)
All in all, it was a good read and now I will patiently wait for more chapters. Although I still hope that you will also continue, "The Wolfpack". It's another one of my favorites. ;)
Until next time! :)
11/7/2017 c5 TyphoeusFlugel
YAY! Thanks for keep on making these so frequently. I like having something that I can rely on being continuous.
YAY! Thanks for keep on making these so frequently. I like having something that I can rely on being continuous.