for Alyss's Return1/20 c3 Guest
looooooooooooooooooooooove it. I really wish it was real. When they said Alyss died I teared up. Thank You
looooooooooooooooooooooove it. I really wish it was real. When they said Alyss died I teared up. Thank You
2/15/2021 c3 RangerAlyss
I love this so much. I cried when Alyss died and to see that you have written a story where she survives lovely. Normally I hate when people write fanfics that have no respect for the authors choices and writing, but this is a different matter. I love this so much.
I love this so much. I cried when Alyss died and to see that you have written a story where she survives lovely. Normally I hate when people write fanfics that have no respect for the authors choices and writing, but this is a different matter. I love this so much.
10/27/2018 c3 Guest
This is pretty good! but I think u should have Will be a little more exited and shocked to see Alyss. she was "dead" for TWO YEARS I would have been like a mix of shock, anger, excitement, etc... otherwise I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
This is pretty good! but I think u should have Will be a little more exited and shocked to see Alyss. she was "dead" for TWO YEARS I would have been like a mix of shock, anger, excitement, etc... otherwise I love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
7/27/2018 c1 Guest
There are so many hidden PJatO references in this I don't even know where to start
There are so many hidden PJatO references in this I don't even know where to start
12/3/2017 c3 
53Lora Kael
I must say I enjoyed the first chapter, but thought the reaction chapters were unnecessary. Not bad, just unnecessary for the story. Chapter 1 stands very well on its own.
Do keep writing. :)
Love Lora
53Lora KaelI must say I enjoyed the first chapter, but thought the reaction chapters were unnecessary. Not bad, just unnecessary for the story. Chapter 1 stands very well on its own.
Do keep writing. :)
Love Lora
11/30/2017 c3 Guest
Besides the language, I loved it.
Besides the language, I loved it.
11/30/2017 c1 Guest
I never thought Alyss to act like this, but it was an interesting way to portray her character.
I never thought Alyss to act like this, but it was an interesting way to portray her character.
11/27/2017 c3 Guest
I will be making an account soon I would love to collab will review again when I've made the account.
I will be making an account soon I would love to collab will review again when I've made the account.
11/29/2017 c1 Computia
Hi!
First off can i just say that this Fanfiction is amazing! Loved it! I was wondering if you wanted to collaborate i have some ideas for a Fanfic and was wondering if you might want to help write them! Or if not could you read over them before I post them and see what you think! I literally just made this account today and I am major noob who loves tow rite and daydreams 24/7! Anyway please let me know if you're keen to work on something with me! I should be on about everyday.
Hi!
First off can i just say that this Fanfiction is amazing! Loved it! I was wondering if you wanted to collaborate i have some ideas for a Fanfic and was wondering if you might want to help write them! Or if not could you read over them before I post them and see what you think! I literally just made this account today and I am major noob who loves tow rite and daydreams 24/7! Anyway please let me know if you're keen to work on something with me! I should be on about everyday.
11/27/2017 c3 11The Wise Dragoness
I absolutely love it! Can't wait to see Cassandra scold Alyss while hugging the life out of her. :)
11The Wise DragonessI absolutely love it! Can't wait to see Cassandra scold Alyss while hugging the life out of her. :)
11/21/2017 c3 32AreiaCannaid
Its great! I really liked this chapter. Cassandra's letter was hilarious. Thank you so much for writing this!
Beauty and the Beast, is it?
Anyways thanks again-and good luck with your next writing project!
32AreiaCannaidIts great! I really liked this chapter. Cassandra's letter was hilarious. Thank you so much for writing this!
Beauty and the Beast, is it?
Anyways thanks again-and good luck with your next writing project!
11/21/2017 c3 Ranger Wyatt
"WHERE THE BLIND, BLUE, BLITHERING BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?"
lol :) great story! bye
"WHERE THE BLIND, BLUE, BLITHERING BLAZES HAVE YOU BEEN?"
lol :) great story! bye
11/9/2017 c2 Guest
Very good and reasonable premise you should continue
Very good and reasonable premise you should continue