for Alyss's Return11/9/2017 c1 Guest
Very good an reasonable premise and you should continue
Very good an reasonable premise and you should continue
11/9/2017 c2 
32AreiaCannaid
Just saw you had another chapter! I loved seeing Halt and Pauline's responses to seeing Alyss again, I think they were perfectly in character too. Also, I'd love another chapter.
Thanks for writing!
32AreiaCannaidJust saw you had another chapter! I loved seeing Halt and Pauline's responses to seeing Alyss again, I think they were perfectly in character too. Also, I'd love another chapter.
Thanks for writing!
11/6/2017 c2 Guest
YAYYYYYYYY PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Definitely Cassandra and Horaces' reactions!
YAYYYYYYYY PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Definitely Cassandra and Horaces' reactions!
10/29/2017 c1 Mystery
Interisting.
Interisting.
10/29/2017 c1 Mystery
There is a misspelled word in the first fourth of the first chapter.
There is a misspelled word in the first fourth of the first chapter.
10/23/2017 c1 7whentheresawill
YESSSSSSSSS! PERFECT. I LOVE IT. WRITE MORE WILL X ALYSS. I NEED LOL. You are very good ;)
7whentheresawillYESSSSSSSSS! PERFECT. I LOVE IT. WRITE MORE WILL X ALYSS. I NEED LOL. You are very good ;)
10/22/2017 c1 11The Wise Dragoness
I love tis ending! It is FAR better than the book's ending! Thank you so much for writing this. :D
11The Wise DragonessI love tis ending! It is FAR better than the book's ending! Thank you so much for writing this. :D
10/22/2017 c1 32AreiaCannaid
Nice job! I really liked this, The plot was great and your writing was awesome and really well developed. How I really wish it had ended this way instead... (headcanon accepted XD). I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for the tale!
32AreiaCannaidNice job! I really liked this, The plot was great and your writing was awesome and really well developed. How I really wish it had ended this way instead... (headcanon accepted XD). I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for the tale!