for My Little Runaway5/13 c45 
9fanclaire
I'm glad the children have finally been found! A little carefree, childish mischief would do Harry the world of good.
9fanclaireI'm glad the children have finally been found! A little carefree, childish mischief would do Harry the world of good.
5/11 c45 13excessivelyperky
Great chapter-and huzzah for Cliffwing, too.
I'm just glad that Yaxley didn't have any more team members besides Alarie and that everyone managed some fun once the excitement was over.
13excessivelyperkyGreat chapter-and huzzah for Cliffwing, too.
I'm just glad that Yaxley didn't have any more team members besides Alarie and that everyone managed some fun once the excitement was over.
5/11 c45 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
5/9 c1 Natalie4q6
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A friend told me about Storio (storioai dot com), it’s actually cool. It transforms static stories into dynamic experiences—great for Wattpad/FF authors. Definitely worth a try if you're into writing!
4/23 c44 13excessivelyperky
I'm quite surprised nobody searched Alarie's trunk, 'just to make sure'. But as it was, the boys did well to make their way out of immediate peril.
Both Yaxley and Alarie are toast, they just don't know it yet.
13excessivelyperkyI'm quite surprised nobody searched Alarie's trunk, 'just to make sure'. But as it was, the boys did well to make their way out of immediate peril.
Both Yaxley and Alarie are toast, they just don't know it yet.
4/20 c44 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
4/20 c44 3alix33
Jesus H Roosevelt Christ, I don't have words (and I was a copyeditor for five different South African newspapers between 2003 and 2023) for how much I loathe that squib Alarie.
3alix33Jesus H Roosevelt Christ, I don't have words (and I was a copyeditor for five different South African newspapers between 2003 and 2023) for how much I loathe that squib Alarie.
4/3 c43 DarkRavie
I really like this story. it's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. it's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
4/3 c43 9fanclaire
Great dive! Oh my god! Severus will move heaven and earth to find the children. Harry, calm down and think. Don't you have any way of reaching Dad? Mentally or in your pocket? Sometimes being desperate can make extraordinary things happen. Hurry before you jump ship!
9fanclaireGreat dive! Oh my god! Severus will move heaven and earth to find the children. Harry, calm down and think. Don't you have any way of reaching Dad? Mentally or in your pocket? Sometimes being desperate can make extraordinary things happen. Hurry before you jump ship!
4/2 c43 14Silverleone
Welp. Someone's going on a warpath next chapter. We've seen Snape mad in the movies. But we never truly saw the paternal side kick in, except maybe in the moment when he got between the Trio and Lupin in Prisoner of Azkaban. So to see him truly pissed as a father...Alarie managed to really screw the pooch on this one.
~Silverleone
14SilverleoneWelp. Someone's going on a warpath next chapter. We've seen Snape mad in the movies. But we never truly saw the paternal side kick in, except maybe in the moment when he got between the Trio and Lupin in Prisoner of Azkaban. So to see him truly pissed as a father...Alarie managed to really screw the pooch on this one.
~Silverleone