for Forbidden Love1/6 c9 troygroomes9398
and I wonder if Kate chews out her father (disowned him in front of Humphreys fathers pack and the 3 alphas that came with Winston)
and I wonder if Kate chews out her father (disowned him in front of Humphreys fathers pack and the 3 alphas that came with Winston)
12/21/2021 c7 troygroomes9398
why do I feel like Hutch is gonna hit someone important and start a war
why do I feel like Hutch is gonna hit someone important and start a war
7/14/2021 c6 troygroomes9398
why not have Winston ask kate where she wants to live and who to marry, only for Kate to disown her parents and the western pack
why not have Winston ask kate where she wants to live and who to marry, only for Kate to disown her parents and the western pack
11/28/2020 c6 
3Troy Groomes
oh dear , i can see kate getting angry and denouncing her position to her father's pack in front of everyone, and saying that she is still an alpha but she will be marrying Humphrey.
meanwhile Garth and Lilly run away from Tony and find out a big secret
3Troy Groomesoh dear , i can see kate getting angry and denouncing her position to her father's pack in front of everyone, and saying that she is still an alpha but she will be marrying Humphrey.
meanwhile Garth and Lilly run away from Tony and find out a big secret
9/4/2018 c1 J4YGV
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This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
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This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
9/1/2018 c1 PKL3D
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This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
Insignia:KY5CHM735QQWHF4LA717R82V6V3YGM95FCTVDEPQ
This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
9/1/2018 c1 Z6XRQ
Insignia:KU3TW13CCLGUD0X2L7W9H6SS4GOCH7R6U3LSKJ5W
This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
Insignia:KU3TW13CCLGUD0X2L7W9H6SS4GOCH7R6U3LSKJ5W
This is a message to all who hate CU.
You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto!
Viva La Revolution.
Mary out.
12/17/2017 c1 24ZadArchie
Just so you know, this story contains sexually explicit content, meaning it really should be rated MA. MA-rated content has not been allowed on this site since 2002, meaning it violates the Rules & Guidelines we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. Not saying you can't write it, but saying this just isn't the place for it. There are plenty of other sites that would gladly take it, including, but not limited to, AO3 and AdultFanfiction. You could also write a watered-down version to stay kosher with site rules and post an unabridged version on another site. Take these suggestions into consideration, as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.
Best,
Zad
Critics United
24ZadArchieJust so you know, this story contains sexually explicit content, meaning it really should be rated MA. MA-rated content has not been allowed on this site since 2002, meaning it violates the Rules & Guidelines we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. Not saying you can't write it, but saying this just isn't the place for it. There are plenty of other sites that would gladly take it, including, but not limited to, AO3 and AdultFanfiction. You could also write a watered-down version to stay kosher with site rules and post an unabridged version on another site. Take these suggestions into consideration, as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.
Best,
Zad
Critics United
12/12/2017 c4 3Troy Groomes
Aw Kate got to see a father in-law (son re unite)
Will Kate & Humphrey be able to marry inside of Humphreys original pack
3Troy GroomesAw Kate got to see a father in-law (son re unite)
Will Kate & Humphrey be able to marry inside of Humphreys original pack
12/4/2017 c1 55Wildebunny the Eternal
MA content isn't allowed on this website. I'm just telling you this since you decided to blight the front page of the archive with another rule-breaking story. Please consider toning this down.
55Wildebunny the EternalMA content isn't allowed on this website. I'm just telling you this since you decided to blight the front page of the archive with another rule-breaking story. Please consider toning this down.
11/27/2017 c3 Rene1458
I honestly love it because it seems like true love and you have to keep the audience entertained and engaged to the plot. I want to meet the author so bad. It’s crazy how this story speaks to me on an emotional and meaningful level.
I honestly love it because it seems like true love and you have to keep the audience entertained and engaged to the plot. I want to meet the author so bad. It’s crazy how this story speaks to me on an emotional and meaningful level.
11/4/2017 c1 Arod11233
Amazing I love how distractive it is
Amazing I love how distractive it is
11/4/2017 c2 Arod11233
Amazing chapter I hope there is more to come.
Amazing chapter I hope there is more to come.