for Holocron6/7/2019 c9 
3WhiteElfElder
Why do I get the feeling it is Ron that is the wielder of the red blade; it seems that Ron is already sliding down the path of Dark.
3WhiteElfElderWhy do I get the feeling it is Ron that is the wielder of the red blade; it seems that Ron is already sliding down the path of Dark.
5/12/2019 c6 3AspiringAuthor236
Why can’t harry just be the only damn one with the force. Like seriously.
3AspiringAuthor236Why can’t harry just be the only damn one with the force. Like seriously.
5/1/2019 c9 Riddle09
Great story! I haven’t been able to put it down yet! I’m curious though how Hagrid had his name cleared in this universe? I suppose it’s possible that Dumbledore was able to interview the diary, but it seems unlikely to me that that would be enough evidence to convince the governors to allow Hagrid to teach.
Somehow seeing Ron teeter on the brink of the dark side is so much more tragic than watching it happen to Anakin. Maybe because it doesn’t have the same feeling of inevitability (or maybe because the writing here is better than the writing in the Prequels).
Thank you for sharing your world.
Great story! I haven’t been able to put it down yet! I’m curious though how Hagrid had his name cleared in this universe? I suppose it’s possible that Dumbledore was able to interview the diary, but it seems unlikely to me that that would be enough evidence to convince the governors to allow Hagrid to teach.
Somehow seeing Ron teeter on the brink of the dark side is so much more tragic than watching it happen to Anakin. Maybe because it doesn’t have the same feeling of inevitability (or maybe because the writing here is better than the writing in the Prequels).
Thank you for sharing your world.
4/26/2019 c3 Guest
Meh, might have been more interesting if it was a Sith Holocron, the Jedi dogooder stuff is pretty boring and generic and doesn't actually change all that much except giving Harry a power-up and a lightsaber, which seems a bit pointless.
Meh, might have been more interesting if it was a Sith Holocron, the Jedi dogooder stuff is pretty boring and generic and doesn't actually change all that much except giving Harry a power-up and a lightsaber, which seems a bit pointless.
4/21/2019 c5 1IAMLORDTHORNE
Thank you so much, I literally was just ranting to a friend about another fic I was reading at the time about what I call regurgitated canon. What use is it to rewrite stuff but leave it the exact same as Jk? it makes no sense and waste's the readers time and gets ours hopes up when you start reading a 200k word story only to read it and find out that all 200k words are actually just year one. Book 1 is just under 77k words so you really wrote 130k words of filler I was very upset. So thank you so much for not doing that!
1IAMLORDTHORNEThank you so much, I literally was just ranting to a friend about another fic I was reading at the time about what I call regurgitated canon. What use is it to rewrite stuff but leave it the exact same as Jk? it makes no sense and waste's the readers time and gets ours hopes up when you start reading a 200k word story only to read it and find out that all 200k words are actually just year one. Book 1 is just under 77k words so you really wrote 130k words of filler I was very upset. So thank you so much for not doing that!
4/21/2019 c2 IAMLORDTHORNE
Loving this and thank you so much for the time skips, keep up the great work.
Loving this and thank you so much for the time skips, keep up the great work.
4/21/2019 c1 IAMLORDTHORNE
OMG I love you, I would like you permission to steal the phrase: "Utter it upon pain of me rolling my eyes! YAS! That line made me live! I am totally that person that rolls there eyes so hard it hurts so this, with your permission, will become my new catchphrase. Back to the important part. LOVE this so far, so much potential, can't wait.
OMG I love you, I would like you permission to steal the phrase: "Utter it upon pain of me rolling my eyes! YAS! That line made me live! I am totally that person that rolls there eyes so hard it hurts so this, with your permission, will become my new catchphrase. Back to the important part. LOVE this so far, so much potential, can't wait.
4/19/2019 c17 SkylerHollow
Very interesting. I'll admit to me it feels a "bit" fast paced but at the same time not overly so. Main thing I'm currently curious about is are you going to have the story continue to after Voldemorts defeat? Either way looking forward to the future updates and seeing how all your foreshadowing comes together.
Very interesting. I'll admit to me it feels a "bit" fast paced but at the same time not overly so. Main thing I'm currently curious about is are you going to have the story continue to after Voldemorts defeat? Either way looking forward to the future updates and seeing how all your foreshadowing comes together.
4/10/2019 c1 50Isaac A. Drake
Quick question is "Saul's Labyrinth" a reference to either The Labyrinth by Saul Steinburg or The Devil's Labyrinth by John Saul?
50Isaac A. DrakeQuick question is "Saul's Labyrinth" a reference to either The Labyrinth by Saul Steinburg or The Devil's Labyrinth by John Saul?
4/8/2019 c17 43BenRG
Through the Force things you will see: What was, what is and what may yet be. I doubt that Voldemort ever planned for having to protect his Soul Anchors from the gaze of the very vibrant core and source of magic itself!
I've got a feeling that Ron has a journey ahead of him and I don't think Hogwarts will be his venue. The path to being a Sith requires as much training and discipline as that to becoming a Jedi. I have no doubt that Harry will stop him if he sees where his friend is going so Ron is going to have to get some time by himself.
(BTW, only Two there ever are: A master and their apprentice - If you're interested, I think that Pansy would make a great Sith Apprentice in the style of Asajj Ventress.)
43BenRGThrough the Force things you will see: What was, what is and what may yet be. I doubt that Voldemort ever planned for having to protect his Soul Anchors from the gaze of the very vibrant core and source of magic itself!
I've got a feeling that Ron has a journey ahead of him and I don't think Hogwarts will be his venue. The path to being a Sith requires as much training and discipline as that to becoming a Jedi. I have no doubt that Harry will stop him if he sees where his friend is going so Ron is going to have to get some time by himself.
(BTW, only Two there ever are: A master and their apprentice - If you're interested, I think that Pansy would make a great Sith Apprentice in the style of Asajj Ventress.)
4/8/2019 c17 Pavel.Fr
Thank you so much for writing! I loved reading and can’t wait for the next chapter!
Thank you so much for writing! I loved reading and can’t wait for the next chapter!
4/7/2019 c17 Iryelb
Oh man, the discovery of the horcruxes is secondary to watching Ron's descent into darkness. I know it's got to be a slow build or else it's not going to mean anything but I just want to get to the turning point already.
Oh man, the discovery of the horcruxes is secondary to watching Ron's descent into darkness. I know it's got to be a slow build or else it's not going to mean anything but I just want to get to the turning point already.