
1/31 c13 Fans del Yuri
Amazing story and great words at the end, this story hooks you the more you dive into it.
Amazing story and great words at the end, this story hooks you the more you dive into it.
12/7/2019 c1
4THUNDERGOD73
I just reread the story and realized the math doesn't add up for the time skip, at the end of the story you wrote 10 years instead of 4

I just reread the story and realized the math doesn't add up for the time skip, at the end of the story you wrote 10 years instead of 4
10/13/2019 c13 AniManHuntress
Do you write also have an Archive of our own account that you update this too? Also thanks for the chapter can’t wait to see where will this great story go
Do you write also have an Archive of our own account that you update this too? Also thanks for the chapter can’t wait to see where will this great story go
10/8/2019 c13
1ElvhenRogue
I don't like how big of a time skip you put, it's far too long for Ruby and Weiss to not have any contact which is clear by the fact Weiss doesn't know how Rubys business is going and Ruby would feel like Weiss didn't really care about their friendship so it would need to be started all over again.
A year or two would have been better since it wouldn't make Weiss go a decade without even trying to contact Ruby

I don't like how big of a time skip you put, it's far too long for Ruby and Weiss to not have any contact which is clear by the fact Weiss doesn't know how Rubys business is going and Ruby would feel like Weiss didn't really care about their friendship so it would need to be started all over again.
A year or two would have been better since it wouldn't make Weiss go a decade without even trying to contact Ruby
10/8/2019 c13
2Benji the Monocat
Waittttttt this is the end of the story? wahhhhhhhh... I wanted more

Waittttttt this is the end of the story? wahhhhhhhh... I wanted more
10/8/2019 c13
2merendinoemiliano
Don't worry about the timing, at least you apologized. Escaping kinda too cringe, for the rest beatiful job, i love how the friendship of the two girls is portrayed alongside the love of their families. Can't wait to read about their reunion, good work.

Don't worry about the timing, at least you apologized. Escaping kinda too cringe, for the rest beatiful job, i love how the friendship of the two girls is portrayed alongside the love of their families. Can't wait to read about their reunion, good work.
10/8/2019 c13 clue1234567
this is really good
this is really good
5/11/2019 c12 Otaku61801
Still waiting for you to continue. Please do though, it would certainly make my day. I'm dying to know the next part! I have been waiting ever since the last update. WE NEED YOU! Just joking! We will wait for you patiently. Thanks!
Still waiting for you to continue. Please do though, it would certainly make my day. I'm dying to know the next part! I have been waiting ever since the last update. WE NEED YOU! Just joking! We will wait for you patiently. Thanks!