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11/13/2017 c4 1Kage Fuusha
Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
11/6/2017 c3 Guest
I like it so far, good job!
11/5/2017 c3 Crouto
You put the last chapter from "Missed Connections" up instead of the Hereafter chapter.
11/5/2017 c3 Shymmer
I'm a little confused, how does this chapter tie to the others?
11/5/2017 c3 1Black Fire Born
holy shit, I love the story and where it is going, take more chapters quickly!
11/5/2017 c3 1Kage Fuusha
Wow, you really went off the reservation with this chapter. Never learn how they met, fell in love...
11/5/2017 c3 1Dr.D180
"third and final chapter"
Wait what? It's done already? Or are you still drunk?
I'm guessing that since the last two chapters were prologues that this is the first actual chapter of the story, but besides the afterlife part of this chapter, I really don't see how this one connects with the others at all.
Hopefully an explanation comes with the next chapter (assuming the beginning notes were just a joke).
11/4/2017 c2 4Hate Eater
No matter the universe Judy always bargain way to much for little. I'm sure Nick here isn't directly involved in whatever Judy's Officers are looking into. Quite the intriguin universe you have here.
11/3/2017 c1 12Armasyll
Why do you capitalize random words that aren't the start of a sentence or a name?
11/2/2017 c1 Guest
Wow, Nick is a real mean spirited asshole in this AU. I think I'll stick with Barbed Wire Dreams, it's way more interesting. Not to mention both Nick and Judy there are closer to their characters.
11/2/2017 c2 12GhostWolf88
Sounds and smells like a military action. Interesting spin.
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