for Adventure Time4/25/2019 c1 Lucas Grundy
i love the end but could use some work. overall i LOVED it!
i love the end but could use some work. overall i LOVED it!
11/9/2017 c1 Spyder-Pig
Ok, this was kind of cute, and sweet. Especially with the whole adventure thing :)
Wait what's that sound? Sort of sounds like a whist- *Gets hit by the fluff train*
Your friendly neighborhood,
Spyder-Pig
Ok, this was kind of cute, and sweet. Especially with the whole adventure thing :)
Wait what's that sound? Sort of sounds like a whist- *Gets hit by the fluff train*
Your friendly neighborhood,
Spyder-Pig
611/7/2017 c1 George
It was cute. A bit rushed. No need for author's notes in the middle of the story. Two spelling errors. Cheast Is spelled: chest. aAnd hesitated is spelled: hesitated. But cute fir your first story. Try and pace it out a bit. And add commas after they speak. tHings like that.
It was cute. A bit rushed. No need for author's notes in the middle of the story. Two spelling errors. Cheast Is spelled: chest. aAnd hesitated is spelled: hesitated. But cute fir your first story. Try and pace it out a bit. And add commas after they speak. tHings like that.