for Fate Overlord (Discontinued)2/26/2024 c2 rhandson.ghost
i really hated what you did with the battle scene in this chapter 2
you stretched it on and on while keeping it much the same battle scene as original with was cool instead of this mess!
i really hated what you did with the battle scene in this chapter 2
you stretched it on and on while keeping it much the same battle scene as original with was cool instead of this mess!
12/26/2023 c1 yahska
Why is he taking so much time killing a bunch of soldiers who were easily taken out by a death knight.
Why is he taking so much time killing a bunch of soldiers who were easily taken out by a death knight.
6/27/2023 c25 Guest
Please delete this work already if already rebooted.
Please delete this work already if already rebooted.
6/17/2023 c25 Guest
If discontinued it should be removed from your works
If discontinued it should be removed from your works
2/18/2023 c25 guestinator
And why should we read it? You already proved here to be unable to finish a story this length, why will you suddenly be able to finish the next and not give up on that one as well?
And why should we read it? You already proved here to be unable to finish a story this length, why will you suddenly be able to finish the next and not give up on that one as well?
2/19/2023 c24 
1ssj3gohan007
Great story! Well done, my friend! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
1ssj3gohan007Great story! Well done, my friend! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
2/15/2023 c25 1SentinalSlice
It’s a shame this was discontinued. I hope that it lives on in the next iteration.
1SentinalSliceIt’s a shame this was discontinued. I hope that it lives on in the next iteration.
1/26/2023 c24 Tutelo
Well, this was bound to happen. Author has a habit of dropping stories and then rewriting them multiple times. I think this was 2nd-3rd time in 6 years this story's been rewritten.
Well, this was bound to happen. Author has a habit of dropping stories and then rewriting them multiple times. I think this was 2nd-3rd time in 6 years this story's been rewritten.
1/28/2023 c24 JRZTT1246
I know this would happen from the very start, I don't think I ever saw you finish any of your story. I won't bash you for dropping since I didn't write anything or involve in your work myself. But this create certain bad rep that you drop story before finish. If this cont too often no one will continue reading your story when they know you will eventually drop it.
I know this would happen from the very start, I don't think I ever saw you finish any of your story. I won't bash you for dropping since I didn't write anything or involve in your work myself. But this create certain bad rep that you drop story before finish. If this cont too often no one will continue reading your story when they know you will eventually drop it.