for Fate Overlord (Discontinued)10/17/2018 c24 Silverchris
For a second I thought the book was going to be “the art of war” but the one you named would be even better in this case.
Great chapter.
For a second I thought the book was going to be “the art of war” but the one you named would be even better in this case.
Great chapter.
10/17/2018 c24 
3Mysterious Gamer X
Their salvation is useless against both Shirou and Ainz, as both are YGGDRASIL players.
3Mysterious Gamer XTheir salvation is useless against both Shirou and Ainz, as both are YGGDRASIL players.
10/17/2018 c24 2miguelgiuliano.co
Este fue un genial capitulo muy al estilo de overlord.
El rey Hassan (Momonga) xD estaría muy orgulloso de ti xD.
Ya quiero ver quienes serán los nobles que se opongan y sean eliminados.
Espero que en el Próximo capitulo veamos algo del descendiente de Gilgamesh y Enkidu, te imaginas a los dos llegando al imperio seria épico y decir que el ancestro de su rey (obvio sería una mentira pero lo haría ideal para controlar el reino).
2miguelgiuliano.coEste fue un genial capitulo muy al estilo de overlord.
El rey Hassan (Momonga) xD estaría muy orgulloso de ti xD.
Ya quiero ver quienes serán los nobles que se opongan y sean eliminados.
Espero que en el Próximo capitulo veamos algo del descendiente de Gilgamesh y Enkidu, te imaginas a los dos llegando al imperio seria épico y decir que el ancestro de su rey (obvio sería una mentira pero lo haría ideal para controlar el reino).
10/17/2018 c24 8Akashic Records
I can't stop giggling! I can't help but envision one of those high-quality yet still fan-made 'How To's' for an MMORPG being some sort of holy text! Hilarious!
8Akashic RecordsI can't stop giggling! I can't help but envision one of those high-quality yet still fan-made 'How To's' for an MMORPG being some sort of holy text! Hilarious!
10/17/2018 c24 1YeTianshi
Those poor humans!
A tutorial for Party Combat in Guild Wars...
How will it help an army of lvl 20's and so on conquer an army of 50's and elites of 100's XD
1YeTianshiThose poor humans!
A tutorial for Party Combat in Guild Wars...
How will it help an army of lvl 20's and so on conquer an army of 50's and elites of 100's XD
9/30/2018 c23 2NobleBoss
This is one of the absolute best chapters. You’ve come a long way from some of the pronoun errors and other things I noticed since chapter one (he vs she for example).
You describe and fulfill everyone’s character very well. Barbos and his stubbornness, Enri in her earnestness, Shirou in his methodical planning and grace/ kindness. The scene where he and Arturia disagreed was great too. I’d like more romance from you concerning them. She is a King in her own right so bring Shirou’s Queen probably wouldn’t suit her ideas of “honor” but I do want them to be much closer if not married. Shirou has absolute love for her and has been seeking her forever after all. I’d like to see affection between the two for example when Shirou cooks for only her. Also, is Blue Rose still in Carne?
I’m glad I finally caught up! I can’t wait for more!
2NobleBossThis is one of the absolute best chapters. You’ve come a long way from some of the pronoun errors and other things I noticed since chapter one (he vs she for example).
You describe and fulfill everyone’s character very well. Barbos and his stubbornness, Enri in her earnestness, Shirou in his methodical planning and grace/ kindness. The scene where he and Arturia disagreed was great too. I’d like more romance from you concerning them. She is a King in her own right so bring Shirou’s Queen probably wouldn’t suit her ideas of “honor” but I do want them to be much closer if not married. Shirou has absolute love for her and has been seeking her forever after all. I’d like to see affection between the two for example when Shirou cooks for only her. Also, is Blue Rose still in Carne?
I’m glad I finally caught up! I can’t wait for more!
9/26/2018 c3 Guest
Okay why is shirou essentially replacing ainz in the story littererly nothing has changed from what ainz did. Show up slaughter knights meet gazef gazef fight save gazef beat angels take magic shots defeat bigger angel. Show some more originally in the story.
Okay why is shirou essentially replacing ainz in the story littererly nothing has changed from what ainz did. Show up slaughter knights meet gazef gazef fight save gazef beat angels take magic shots defeat bigger angel. Show some more originally in the story.
9/26/2018 c1 Guest
Remember shirou is good maybe to good by good I mean in the righteous sense so him slaughtering the knights is a little out of character and something I'd more expect from ainz.
Remember shirou is good maybe to good by good I mean in the righteous sense so him slaughtering the knights is a little out of character and something I'd more expect from ainz.
9/27/2018 c12 NobleBoss
Manwoman lol I love the humor you’ve been working into this story despite its serious nature!
Manwoman lol I love the humor you’ve been working into this story despite its serious nature!