for Fate Overlord (Discontinued)8/27/2018 c22 Guest
I’m going to be honest with you, at first this story was alright. It contained a not insignificant amount of grammar errors, but it was neat seeing what Shirou did differently. Like resurrecting everyone including his enemies, that was a nice touch. Unfortunately, starting from around the Tsuare incident this story has been following canon way too closely. These last two chapters were basically just canon with some names changed. Like why the hell would Nfirea live in Carne, Shirou wouldn’t be so cruel to force that on him, to name one example. Damn shame, this story looked promising.
I’m going to be honest with you, at first this story was alright. It contained a not insignificant amount of grammar errors, but it was neat seeing what Shirou did differently. Like resurrecting everyone including his enemies, that was a nice touch. Unfortunately, starting from around the Tsuare incident this story has been following canon way too closely. These last two chapters were basically just canon with some names changed. Like why the hell would Nfirea live in Carne, Shirou wouldn’t be so cruel to force that on him, to name one example. Damn shame, this story looked promising.
8/26/2018 c22 petrovpa
Ok. I lost it at chapter 11 and never could understand again one thing: WTF is happening. Words and sentences make sense, but not anything else. Idea may be somewhat good but it could be fed us in like three times more words so that we could actually get it.
I stopped looking at any flaws and read it like a comix without pictures. But let me point at some the most glaring things. WTF are chances that nobody didn't tried to understand who exactly were family of the Godkin for all time he was taking his time at capital. And there are more and the more the merrier. That is not to say that it is bad. It is just unreadable as a whole for a time being. You can cut it in 10-13 separate unrelated histories and that would be nice stuff.
Ok. I lost it at chapter 11 and never could understand again one thing: WTF is happening. Words and sentences make sense, but not anything else. Idea may be somewhat good but it could be fed us in like three times more words so that we could actually get it.
I stopped looking at any flaws and read it like a comix without pictures. But let me point at some the most glaring things. WTF are chances that nobody didn't tried to understand who exactly were family of the Godkin for all time he was taking his time at capital. And there are more and the more the merrier. That is not to say that it is bad. It is just unreadable as a whole for a time being. You can cut it in 10-13 separate unrelated histories and that would be nice stuff.
8/25/2018 c22 uzu
great chapter please update soon.
great chapter please update soon.
8/24/2018 c22 Guestinator
Here is my one problem, where is Shirou? He was there, then talking to Arturia about his experience and that was it. We haven't seen him in.. 3 full chapters now I think?
Where has he been? How has he missed this? What has he been doing?
Because we have no clue. There is so far no in story reason for him to not have been right there on the front line. Wasn't he literally in the blasted city or at least in the area the last we saw of him?
It seems this story has stopped being about Shirou and moved on. If this is so, if this is what we can expect to happen in the future with outright ignoring the MC, his very powerful ally and how they should have been in a battle... Can we please be warned? Because I would rather know now and stop reading this then hoping it will go back to the way it was.
I am here for Shirou. Multiple chapters that exclude him for no foreseeable reason when he should have been is as far as I know just tossing him to the side. If I after 19 or so chapters such a massive change is going to continue it would be nice and polite to know now.
"Yo Shirou! Talk to Artuira in the area of your place, don't leave or anything. Then lets have a massive battle where your people die and city is attacked. No don't even have a single sentence shown during all of this. You are not needed any more."
That above? That is what I am getting and it is quite sad. I enjoyed this story so much and now... Now it feels like things are being hand waved to have a battle, a war, that Shirou could handle in an instance purely for the sake of writing about said battle/war.
It goes against the feel, the story itself, previously.
Here is my one problem, where is Shirou? He was there, then talking to Arturia about his experience and that was it. We haven't seen him in.. 3 full chapters now I think?
Where has he been? How has he missed this? What has he been doing?
Because we have no clue. There is so far no in story reason for him to not have been right there on the front line. Wasn't he literally in the blasted city or at least in the area the last we saw of him?
It seems this story has stopped being about Shirou and moved on. If this is so, if this is what we can expect to happen in the future with outright ignoring the MC, his very powerful ally and how they should have been in a battle... Can we please be warned? Because I would rather know now and stop reading this then hoping it will go back to the way it was.
I am here for Shirou. Multiple chapters that exclude him for no foreseeable reason when he should have been is as far as I know just tossing him to the side. If I after 19 or so chapters such a massive change is going to continue it would be nice and polite to know now.
"Yo Shirou! Talk to Artuira in the area of your place, don't leave or anything. Then lets have a massive battle where your people die and city is attacked. No don't even have a single sentence shown during all of this. You are not needed any more."
That above? That is what I am getting and it is quite sad. I enjoyed this story so much and now... Now it feels like things are being hand waved to have a battle, a war, that Shirou could handle in an instance purely for the sake of writing about said battle/war.
It goes against the feel, the story itself, previously.
8/24/2018 c22 A Guest
Oh My God, this chapter was awesome.
Oh My God, this chapter was awesome.
8/24/2018 c22 Guest
Why cant you just destroy re estize? The place is a place full of filth. All nobles are greedy, all the royals is two faced shit stain personality.
Frankly speaking, the country worth as much as a shit be. Just destroy the re estize
Why cant you just destroy re estize? The place is a place full of filth. All nobles are greedy, all the royals is two faced shit stain personality.
Frankly speaking, the country worth as much as a shit be. Just destroy the re estize
8/23/2018 c22 Guest
Good...good.
Now can we get to the uprooting of the royal family tree and all nobility please? I think it would be fine to cleanse the populous of all beings above the merchant caste for a start.
Good...good.
Now can we get to the uprooting of the royal family tree and all nobility please? I think it would be fine to cleanse the populous of all beings above the merchant caste for a start.
8/23/2018 c22 PERORONCINO
Well that was Exciting...Watching Chaldea trash Barbros Shitty Army ...pls released the next chapter as soon as possible...and I bet Ainz is gonna wet his Pants when he finds out that Shirou Emiya has an Army of High Humans
Well that was Exciting...Watching Chaldea trash Barbros Shitty Army ...pls released the next chapter as soon as possible...and I bet Ainz is gonna wet his Pants when he finds out that Shirou Emiya has an Army of High Humans
8/23/2018 c22 PasiveNox
Damn great job yeah nice nice huh an army
Damn great job yeah nice nice huh an army
8/24/2018 c22 
2miguelgiuliano.co
Genial capítulo esperó con ansias por el próximo capítulo.
Ya quiero ver cuales serán los caminos que se tomen ahora con esta victoria de Chaldea-Empire
2miguelgiuliano.coGenial capítulo esperó con ansias por el próximo capítulo.
Ya quiero ver cuales serán los caminos que se tomen ahora con esta victoria de Chaldea-Empire